Comparing some bits and pieces of the text, this is written in a much more competent way than the original (it’s more of a localization though, not an accurate one-to-one translation, so that’s what I’m evaluating - for a more accurate experience, play the original/Generations translation), which had some typos and lots of typical 80s/90s awkwardness in terms of dialogues. While PS 1 is very important historically and (IMO) still holds up fairly well to this day - especially the Switch version with automapping - the original translation does not. There’s not much story anyway, but this version is written considerably better than the original. I’d probably still recommend the fan-translation of Phantasy Star Generations over the MS game (quite a few QoL improvements, expanded script etc.), but if you want to play the original - play this version and never look back. Additionally, there are so many fixes/QoL to this patch that there’s just no reason to pass up on this version.