Okay I'll get to work on those soon. Except I would not know how to fix the screen transition. What exactly is the problem if you can be more specific?
When you go up on that screen you end up stuck in a bush, the only way out is to go back down to the previous screen. Simply editing the screen in question to have bushes there would solve the problem.
BTW, I've finished the first quest. No further issues were found. Though I must say, the use of red skull bubbles is just brutal...
Is the second quest ready for testing? I don't ant to take a stab at it and start listing any problems I find if you're not ready..