Konichiwa, FC-san. Arigatō! ^_^
I began to play the game a little bit
and haven't gotten too far yet, so I
might be out of line when it comes
to certain things, but just to
cover all bases, I hope you
don't mind me sharing some
of my notes:
There should be no space between "this" and "...".
"Some bad guys leave traps like this..."
The same goes for the other places with
three dots. I do guess that you have
fixed it already, so I apologize in
There should be a comma after "Thank you"
so it reads "Thank you, Kintaro!".
There should be a comma after "go"
so it reads "Let's go, everyone!".
There should be a comma after "hey"
so it reads "hey, boy".
It looks like a comma is missing after
"earlier" if he's addressing the bear.
There's no need to write "password" with
a capital "P" as in "Enter password".