Some reports between RC22 to RC24:
- Nightmare's Origin scene with X and Zero
Since way back then, when he and I were
in the Reploid Research Team...
Every Reploid he created was off the
(Opinion: No matter how many times I read it, after 'Reploid Research Team...' doesn't seems like the end of a sentence.)
(Suggestion: Change to 'Team... ...every'. Already mentioned this before but you can totally ignore this if you disagree with me.)
- Zero's epilogue
Besides, I don't mean to pry, but...
Without you around, what will we do if
something happens again?
(Opinion: I felt like after 'but...' is not a new sentence.)
(Suggestion: Change to 'but... ...without'.)
- Boss Attacks
Cut idle time (vs. X)
Could you include this for Zero as well? Most of the time, when Commander Yammark starts moving, he already loss half of his HP.
By the way, I like what you added on Blizzard Wolfang.
- Animation Timming Zero's Saber
Whenever I reduce the origin 12-4-4-4-10-6-4 to 11, there will be a desync in the animation.
Also, I don't recall having a sheath effect saber animation in the original game. Did you purposely include it?
Sigh, I wished I know how to insert image and show you what I meant.