I guess I didn't read as closely as I thought. Going over the post history, I see that @SCD provided screens of the Jag. version for the uncensored text. Just for completeness I typed out the original SNES text as well as the DOS text (at the end of this message), in the event it would make since to merge some of the text from these two versions. Possibly for the final victory screen as it wasn't in the SNES or Jag it seems. In cases of proper grammar or not, I figured it would be most deseriable to look to what the original Jag/SNES or DOS versions show.
So to follow up on @nosynose good post:
Mission 2:
and then seek out -> then seek out (remove 'and') <--- AGREE, especially as original SNES read as "You must seek him out..."
The Kommandant -> The Commandant <--- Original Jag version says Kommandant
Trans? Grobe (weird name) <--- Original SNES reads as "The Head of the Elite Guard there is Trans Grosse..."
and destroying -> and then destroying (add 'then') <--- Neutral, could go either way.
Mission 3:
Nazi Soldiers - Nazi soldier <--- Original snes reads "...to make fallen soldiers rise and fight again...". The Jag version has all text capitalized.
Mission 4:
Nazi War Machine -> Nazi war machine <--- AGREE, original DOS says "...even as the Nazi war machine falls to its knees..."
In East Prussia is -> In East Prussia there is (add 'there') <--- No comment
all its plans -> all its plans. (add period) <--- AGREE.
Nazi Menace -> Nazi menace <--- Neutral
free World -> free world <--- AGREE.
Mission 5:
Assault -> assault <--- AGREE
Mission 6:
the World -> the world <--- AGREE
German Castle -> German castle <--- AGREE
Mission 7:
Willian J. Blaskowicz -> William J. Blazkowicz <--- AGREE
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SNES
(mission 1):
Blazkowicz, you've served the Republic well. You're our top operative, a one-man strike team. However, infiltrating the Master State will not be easy. Staatmeister and his forces are determined to rule the world.
Your first task: find and eliminate Hans Grosse, Staatmeister's most ruthless enforcer. He marshals the forces from a castle outside Dresden. You will have to wade through his crack forces to reach him. Good luck.
(mission 2):
You never cease to amaze me, B.J. You have defeated the horrible enforcer Hans. I'd congratulate you, but the Master State does not rest, so neither can we. We don't have that luxury.
Their scientists are building weapons... chemical weapons. Yes, in direct violation of the Convention. You must go to Castle Erlangren, find and neutralize the source.
The Head of the Elite Guard there is Trans Grosse. You must terminate him. We're counting on you.
(mission 3):
Your last mission was a glowing success. Your next assignment will be nearly impossible to believe, much less complete.
The insane Doctor Schabbs is...well, reports have it that he is using what he calls a "Corpsokinetic Animation Serum" to make fallen soldiers rise and fight again. You must rid the world of these abominations and stop Schabbs' evil work.
(mission 4):
You've hit them hard, but their plans are already in motion. Up in the mountains is a fortress where the weapons are stockpiled, and the war room lies.
Guarding the plans is the hideous masterpiece of Doctor Schabbs: the Ubermutant. It is an abomination, and lives to protect the interests of the Master State. If you get the plans, your country will owe you a great debt.
(mission 5):
The plans, as you are aware, detail their first attack strategem, which is already underway. You must travel to Castle Heidenheim and face their leader. He is known as the Death Knight.
It won't be easy. That's why we're sending you.
(mission 6):
After the blows we have dealt to his plans, Staatmeister wages desperate, brutal war upon the Republic. He is attacking civilian targets. He must be stopped.
He has fallen back to his last stand, in the legendary Master State keep known as Wolfenstein. You must seek him out and stop the destruction. Terminate Staatmeister now. Millions of lives lie in the balance. Good luck, William.
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DOS
(EP 1):
CONGRATULATIONS!
You run out of the castle and hook up with the Underground. They inform you that the rumors were true: some hideous human experiments were seen around Castle Hollenhammer. So Operation Eisenfaust is real!
You must journey there and terminate the maniacal Dr. Schabbs before his undead army marches against humanity!
MORE WOLFENSTEIN
And in episode three, Hitler hides in his titanic bunker as the Third Reich crumbles about him. It is your job to assassinate him, ending his mad reign.
And if you like Wolfenstein, you'll love the prequel trilogy of Nocturnal Missions! Thirty more action-packed, super-challenging levels!
(EP 2):
CONGRATULATIONS!
You stand over Schabbs’ fat, evil, swollen putrid body, glad your mission is finally over. All his journals and equipment will be destroyed. Humanity is safe from his hordes of hideous mutants.
Yet the Nazi atrocities continue: thousands march into death camps even as the Nazi war machine falls to its knees. There is only one way to stop the madness….
MISSION: TERMINATE HITLER
In episode three, Hitler hides in his titanic bunker as the Thrid Reich crumbles about him. It is your job to assassinate him, ending his mad reign. You find he has escaped to the Reichstag, and there you must confront him.
And if you like Wolfenstein, you’ll love the prequel trilogy of “Nocturnal Missions!” Thirty more action-packed, super-challenging levels!
(EP 3):
CONGRATULATIONS!
The absolute incarnation of evil, Adolf Hitler, lies at your feet in a pool of his own blood. His wrinkled, crimson-splattered visage still strains, a jagged-toothed rictus trying to cry out. Insane even in death. Your lips pinched in bitter victory, you kick his head off his remains and spit on his corpse.
Sieg heil...huh. Sieg hell.
BUT THE ADVENTURE IS JUST BEGINNING!
And if you like Wolfenstein, you’ll love the prequel trilogy of “Nocturnal Missions!” Thirty more action-packed, super-challenging levels! B.J. battles the Nazis as they plan large-scale chemical warfare. Fight Otto Giftmacher, Gretel Grosse, and General Fettgesicht!
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