Looks like most of the pointer stuff has been fixed regarding dialogue locations. There are some minor spelling errors that remain that I'll post here.

V where a space should be.

One L instead of two

Not an error, but I'm not sure about the "yay!" at the end.

Bleeding text here

Worse text bleeding at Darunia entrance sign

Darunia spelling error.

Again, one L instead of two

Someones instead of "Somones"

Finally, some garbage tiles in the game's ending for when Zelda wakes up.
That's everything I could find this go around.