Looks like most of the pointer stuff has been fixed regarding dialogue locations. There are some minor spelling errors that remain that I'll post here.
V where a space should be.
One L instead of two
Not an error, but I'm not sure about the "yay!" at the end.
Bleeding text here
Worse text bleeding at Darunia entrance sign
Darunia spelling error.
Again, one L instead of two
Someones instead of "Somones"
Finally, some garbage tiles in the game's ending for when Zelda wakes up.
That's everything I could find this go around.