#1:
There is an extra space before the quote, which is inconsistent with the rest of those captions.
Formatting error. What happened is this:
"The beloved staff of Zettai Reido,
the commanding officer of the first squadron{newline}in Hell's army."{newline}
"He used this icy staff to perform his special move.{pause} The staff was entrusted to us by Officer Zettai Reido himself."
The problem was, I had put a linebreak after newline, and the game treats every line break as a space. Looking at this again, I see that there's an unnecessary pause tag here as well. (Pause tags should not appear in written text, only spoken text.)
#2:
Nitpick: this "a" could be moved to the next line.
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I usually did that sort of thing (as you can tell by how symmetrical the rest of the script looks), but I think I left it there because it would have otherwise moved one word down to the next line, which also didn't look right.
I removed the ellipses to get around that, and now it all looks symmetrical.
Thanks but I looked all over the caves and did not find it. Does it involve those switches and carts? I saw some places to mine for gold and also a man blocking a room, asking for that item.
Go in through the alternate entrance - it's on the far left.
