Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]

[Mariomaniac85]

mock up of a title screen for my Bart vs. Donkey Kong hack, obvs gonna have to change the size of Bart and Vs. Might have to change Donkey Kong to just DK, also how do you edit the title screen?

[Supergamerguy]

mock up of a title screen for my Bart vs. Donkey Kong hack, obvs gonna have to change the size of Bart and Vs. Might have to change Donkey Kong to just DK, also how do you edit the title screen?

Crying Onion made a tutorial guide back when he helped me with my own hack of Donkey Kong: The Secret World of Arriety. You can find that guide here: https://www.romhacking.net/documents/823/

I also made a guide explaining how to edit the color palettes and text for NES Donkey Kong, if that helps too. It's here: https://www.romhacking.net/documents/824/

[Mariomaniac85]

Thanks!

[Mariomaniac85]

Alright got the main title done! Now how do I edit the copyright date?

[Supergamerguy]

Alright got the main title done! Now how do I edit the copyright date?

You should be able to find the text location in the guide I made, linked above.

[Drewhinson7]

ooooooo i like that title screen i see you used my title name idea and yes i came up with the name bart vs donkey but now its bart vs kong

[Googie]

Something I put together in one night, I borrowed somma the sprites from that SMB Halloween hack.

[yugisokubodai]

Nearly 4000 lines of code for pre-render proportional fonts in this menu.

[yugisokubodai]

Added some new features to FE4.

[Googie]

A couple of screenshots for my Ms. Pac-Man hacks. Everything is done just gotta stop being lazy and hack again. 

[yugisokubodai]

There's ancient language in Zelda 3. 

[Jsteward24]

I wanted to post my design for a One Piece Gameboy game!

[Zynk]

 

[sics]

Title screen mockup, under the restrictions of NES, I only made it not to lose practice, I don't plan to use it in any project

You can see the version with the XBR3 filter in my Deviant

[tryphon]

I've tried to localize Magical Taruruuto-kun title screen (the Megadrive game) :

Original



English (I'll add start on I of MAGICAL)



I tried using a similar typography. Please citicize (I'm no graphist).

[Zynk]

I've tried to localize Magical Taruruuto-kun title screen (the Megadrive game) :

Original



English (I'll add [star] on I of MAGICAL)*



I tried using a similar typography. Please [criticize (I'm no graphic artist).

1. *This. And maybe try spelling the title as "Magical★Taruruuto-kun" with the star at the end of "Magical" included.
2. The second "ru" in that swirly design.
3. The "Taru" and "ruto" letters the same design as the JP title. (Basically all letters should have a similar style as the JP title)
4. Each word placed like in the JP title identically.
5. Try to Capitalize Each Word

[tryphon]

You're right, I misidentified the japanese font. I choose a rounded Arial, and added bubbles :



Is is better ?

I tried to make a curvy U for the RU, but I'm not really satisfied with it :



What do you think ?

EDIT: putting all together

[Zynk]

What do you think ?

EDIT: putting all together

This looks better.