Played the hack a bit yesterday and I found a couple error's I thought I'd report:
-when you return the Earth Crystal to troia's Epopts there's a blank textbox

looking it up, this box should have Cid and Cecil reacting to Kain's voice, who notices they've returned the crystal.
-After the whole tower of zot section and the party is in Cecil's bedroom Kain needs to tell you something and after Cecil asks what.

Looks like Kain should be saying the last line in this box but his name isn't there, leading to Cecil having a small exchange with himself but there IS alot of text to shove in here so it's hard to fix without reading a bit clunky. My idea would be...
Kain: Cecil, I must tell you something.
Cecil: What about?
Kain: The Crystals.
Really enjoying your work, tho.