Don't let these comments get under your skin, your mod's almost at 30000 downloads so there has to be quite a lot of people that do want it. If it's a line that was changed then I think you should be open to feedback and other's opinions, but with that being said you've already given your viewpoint on the bear/bodybuilder thing and if you've decided that the line is final then you can just ignore any further feedback on it and leave it as is. I think the line is fine given what you were going for.
I'm sure pretty much everyone that posts in this thread thinks you've done a great job on the mod even if they don't actually say it, so don't get upset about people popping in and dropping their 2 cents on whatever is being discussed (including me
). They don't mean any harm by it and there's nothing wrong with you ignoring them if you don't care for what they have to say, or if you've explained yourself already.
As for people complaining about pointless crap like how often you're updating your mod, you should definitely just ignore them and do your thing. There's always going to be someone like that around that loves to complain about every little thing since they have nothing better to do with their time.
I see the mod is still up for now (and I hope it can stay that way), so I'll go ahead and post what else I've found on my playthrough.
heaven should be lowercase here I believe
checkpoint can be 1 word
Clockmaker can be 1 word
This line is fine I think, but Kefka's soldiers during the assault on Figaro Castle at the start of the game would say "Sir" capitalized. After thinking about it I'm pretty sure it should be lowercase, but either way it should be made consistent.
jump-rope is usually just 2 words without the hyphen whenever I've seen it
Another capitalized Sir
judgment is the usual spelling
Having this guard say cometh is kind of strange imo since Cyan is usually the only one to do the ye olde english thing.
seems like it should be til instead of till, since it's short for until
description says "gloves" plural, but name of item is a singular glove
hyphen can be removed for "still life" I think