I opted for TelportStone. The missing e isn't so obvious and it's the official name.
July 14, 2019, 07:06:39 pm - (Auto Merged - Double Posts are not allowed before 7 days.)
Okay, so I know Dzumeister might still be playing through 2.03, but I wanted this next round of updates to be available (and in the case that he does not find anything else in need of correction). Version 2.05 has been submitted for approval.
Sadly, there's still more stuff to be found. Honestly, I'd like to work through this a little bit more efficiently through all of this since a Completionist run is about 64 hours
. Would there be an easier way for me to go through and proofread? It feels like every time I boot up the game, I'm finding places that need a second look or an edit.Post #1
Just wanted to say that Celes, Locke, and Terra are sooooooo dramatic in this part of the story
Super minor, just wanted to point out an instance of 1000
in case you decided you wanted to change to 1,000
Unnecessary comma in the second sentence.Another of the Empire's generals and a person I hired in town will be traveling with us as well.
Unnecessary comma after Celes
. Sidenote: my girlfriend thinks that there's way too many pauses/periods of ellipsis leading up to this point in the story
I agree, but I think it's a carryover from the translation, right?
Minor thing, but I thought garrote
was kind of an awkward verb when kill
works fine, especially when Shadow doesn't even use them. If it's a Woolseyism, then just dismiss this
Should be spent
instead of spend
Inconsistent usage of mayor
. I don't remember and I didn't have a savestate to double-check, but I think before the burning house event, the Mayor is referred to as Elder when you first arrive in Thamasa, but afterwards, he's referred to as Mayor.
I don't think begun
is right here. Using started
should be fine.