I opted for TelportStone. The missing e isn't so obvious and it's the official name.
July 14, 2019, 07:06:39 pm - (Auto Merged - Double Posts are not allowed before 7 days.)
Okay, so I know Dzumeister might still be playing through 2.03, but I wanted this next round of updates to be available (and in the case that he does not find anything else in need of correction). Version 2.05 has been submitted for approval.
Sadly, there's still more stuff to be found. Honestly, I'd like to work through this a little bit more efficiently through all of this since a
Completionist run is about 64 hours. Would there be an easier way for me to go through and proofread? It feels like every time I boot up the game, I'm finding places that need a second look or an edit.
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Post #8Just wanted to say that Celes, Locke, and Terra are sooooooo dramatic in this part of the story


Super minor, just wanted to point out an instance of
1000 in case you decided you wanted to change to
1,000
Unnecessary comma in the second sentence.
Another of the Empire's generals and a person I hired in town will be traveling with us as well.
Unnecessary comma after
Celes. Sidenote: my girlfriend thinks that there's way too many pauses/periods of ellipsis leading up to this point in the story

I agree, but I think it's a carryover from the translation, right?

Minor thing, but I thought
garrote was kind of an awkward verb when
kill works fine, especially when Shadow doesn't even use them. If it's a Woolseyism, then just dismiss this


Should be
spent instead of
spend

Inconsistent usage of
mayor and
elder. I don't remember and I didn't have a savestate to double-check, but I think before the burning house event, the Mayor is referred to as Elder when you first arrive in Thamasa, but afterwards, he's referred to as Mayor.

I don't think
begun is right here. Using
started should be fine.