awesome! i'm glad i can contribute in my own way.
In mythology, a bonnacon doesn't spray vomit, but acidic feces!
one day there will be a troll patch that renames the attack "Acid Shart"
there are inconsistencies in how ellipses (…) are presented. sometimes there's a space before the following word, sometimes not. in my opinion, an ellipsis should always be followed by a space UNLESS it's at the beginning of a standalone line.
this might have been a misread on my part, because i accidentally mashed past this page during the Floating Continent approach - but if i DID read it correctly as it flew by, there's an "is" missing.
"Mr. Typhon taciturn,
…but terribly powerful!"
two things during the cutscene with Kefka on the Floating Continent:
after Kefka gets stabbed, there's a few pages of HATE YOU and then a final page with a centered "HATE YOU!" - i don't recall there being any other text so far that got special positioning, so the presentation is jarring. i do understand the intent, and it's definitely a subjective opinion, but... i'd have it positioned normally by itself on that page.
later in the same scene, there's a comma missing on one page.
"Do it now gods!" -> "Do it now, gods!"
during the scenes during the first visit to Mobliz in the WoR:
"Terra: That is I... um... I've lost my will to fight..."
there should be an ellipsis or comma after "That is"
i'll be picking up from WoR Nikeah next time.