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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #840 on: October 18, 2014, 10:49:45 pm »
Woot! All the issues my translator reported are fixed. Now I can move onto my playtest and edit.

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #841 on: October 19, 2014, 05:46:10 am »
That's...actually not Engrish. "s's" is entirely acceptable as long as you don't have two esses before the apostrophe. (If you do, you omit the S after the apostrophe.)

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #842 on: October 19, 2014, 12:14:27 pm »
I never heard that before.
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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #843 on: October 19, 2014, 03:00:25 pm »
It's an exception for proper nouns.

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #844 on: October 19, 2014, 05:58:39 pm »
No, it applies even to regular nouns, such as 'goddesses'. "The goddess's love for her people" is perfectly fine, for instance. "The goddesses' sword" is also good English. "The goddesses's sword" is not, because you start to sound like a snake.

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #845 on: October 19, 2014, 06:21:02 pm »
goddesseseseseseseses

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #846 on: October 19, 2014, 08:23:34 pm »
Goddesses does not receive an additional s because it is plural.

I usually turn to two sources for Grammar answers, the first being Grammar Girl, and the second being Purdue OWL.

Grammar Girl writes:
Quote from: Grammar Girl
Is it Kansas's statute with an apostrophe s or Kansas' statute with just an apostrophe at the end?

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Associated Press style ... recommends leaving off the extra s. Some of you have noticed that I tend to favor AP style, so you won't be surprised to learn that I prefer to leave off the extra s. Unfortunately, I have to admit that this isn't a hard-and-fast rule; it's a style issue. Other style books such as Fowler's Modern English Usage recommend adding the apostrophe s to almost all singular words that end with s.*

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*The exceptions according to Fowler’s are words such as Moses and Bridges that end with an s that makes an /iz/ sound, classical names such as Zeus and Venus, and Jesus. Fowler's suggests that all of these words should end with just an apostrophe (e.g., Moses' tablets).

So, likely, that says that even using the example style of Fowler's, Hercules would not receive an additional s.

In contrast, The Purdue OWL states:

Quote from: Purdue OWL
add 's to the singular form of the word (even if it ends in -s):
the owner's car
James's hat (James' hat is also acceptable. For plural, proper nouns that are possessive, use an apostrophe after the 's': "The Eggleses' presentation was good." The Eggleses are a husband and wife consultant team.)

... which simply states that both are acceptable.

Regardless, The x of y, instead y's x, is still a notable improvement for a title.

Now, whether Glories should be used in a countable manner or not would depend upon the specific meaning in context:

Quote from: Oxford Learners' Dictionary
4 [countable] a special cause for pride, respect or pleasure
The temple is one of the glories of ancient Greece.
Her long black hair is her crowning glory(= most impressive feature).

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #847 on: October 19, 2014, 09:54:52 pm »
In grammar school I was taught the no word ending in s gets an 's.
And regardless of the correctness of any of this stuff the bottom line is that "The Glory of Heracles" sounds much more pleasing the "Hercules's Glory".
It just sounds awkward.

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #848 on: October 20, 2014, 05:15:47 pm »
In grammar school I was taught the no word ending in s gets an 's.

This is also what I was taught, but to be fair, English teachers tend to pick pet "rules" to teach and enforce even though there may more than one "rule" considered acceptable, and many of the grammar rules that you see people calling each other on have no basis beyond that one person one day decided that something was no longer proper, even though it was considered 100% acceptable for ages beforehand.

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #849 on: October 20, 2014, 05:22:35 pm »
This is also what I was taught, but to be fair, English teachers tend to pick pet "rules" to teach and enforce even though there may more than one "rule" considered acceptable, and many of the grammar rules that you see people calling each other on have no basis beyond that one person one day decided that something was no longer proper, even though it was considered 100% acceptable for ages beforehand.

I believe it. I was taught both the "never do it" rule and the "proper nouns get an exception" rule.

Either way, I agree with Vanya that "The Glory of Heracles" sounds better, and I think that's the most important part.
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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #850 on: October 20, 2014, 08:09:41 pm »
Either way, I agree with Vanya that "The Glory of Heracles" sounds better, and I think that's the most important part.

I don't think anyone's disputing that :) Though I totally dig the idea of "The Glories of <propernoun>" as the title for a game.

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #851 on: October 20, 2014, 08:33:03 pm »
My understanding is that plural is the only time an apostrophe comes after an 's', such as romhackers' rights.

Singular items which end in an 's' still show an apostrophe as ownership along with an 's', such as Jesus's shoes.

The last time I consulted scholarly sources on the use, the best I had found was that both are acceptable so long as you stick with one convention, but that it is technically correct the way I wrote it above.

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #852 on: October 21, 2014, 11:21:14 am »
I personally don't write "Jesus's" because I don't say "jee-zuhs-es".
If it's not correct to pronounce it, then I don't write it is one of my personal rules with the notable exception of my choice to spell it 'wierd' and not 'weird'.

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #853 on: November 08, 2014, 03:30:56 pm »
Super Robot Wars MX Portable is almost completely hacked.



We're going FWF for this one, replacing kanjis in the font for ASCII pairs (font is DejaVu Sans Mono).

There's already some Java tools for translating both the story and battle text. There's also a tool for translating about half the menu strings (unit / character / weapon / etc names and descriptions), although it has some issues (a couple of pointers still need to be located). The other half is under way.

There's currently just one guy that has offered to translate, and he admits he can only do machine translation, so he'll probably take care of the menu strings. Anyone feels like translating this little monster's story?

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #854 on: November 09, 2014, 12:18:21 pm »
Finally got the English font routine working for this game!  Probably going to rewrite it later on though as it's very ugly atm.  There's no VWF coding to go into this and it's definitely not really necessary with how little dialogue this game has.  (PLACE HOLDER FONT)



Now comes the hard part of completely rewriting how the game handles it's text.  It's all hard-coded pointers right now per character per specific event.  Really annoying :<
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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #855 on: November 14, 2014, 06:41:06 pm »
Finally got everything sorted so I can insert custom maps into "Advance Wars: Days of Ruin".  Basically working on replacing the "Trial Maps", since the ones in the originally aren't that great.

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #856 on: November 18, 2014, 08:21:00 pm »
Sidetracked from the Gun Survivor remake, I ended up having my own arcade Resident Evil à la The Mercenaries 3D.

For those wondering, those are the DS models. The engine is performing well enough to let me have a good number of them with no lag.
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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #857 on: November 18, 2014, 08:27:56 pm »
Finally got everything sorted so I can insert custom maps into "Advance Wars: Days of Ruin".  Basically working on replacing the "Trial Maps", since the ones in the originally aren't that great.

Nice!

Although you do know that the ability to insert DoR maps has been available for over a year, right? (They're basically the same as the AW2/3 ones).

Also you should probably ask x0 if you're going to use his maps for a work you're going to release :P

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #858 on: November 18, 2014, 11:30:00 pm »
More Advance Wars hacks are always a good thing :) I'd love to see War Room 2015 soon  :beer:

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Re: Screenshots
« Reply #859 on: November 19, 2014, 01:23:48 pm »
Sidetracked from the Gun Survivor remake, I ended up having my own arcade Resident Evil à la The Mercenaries 3D.

For those wondering, those are the DS models. The engine is performing well enough to let me have a good number of them with no lag.

That is absolutely FANTASTIC!  I love the progress on everything!  This keeps looking better and better!
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'We'll kill off children in the Juuban district with an infection where they cough up blood and are found hanging themselves from cherry blossom trees.'