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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #320 on: March 08, 2011, 10:35:57 pm »
Oh yes, it looks much better now. Although... Do the G and W really have to be that thick? I mean, it looks better now but it still feels like there's something weird going on. Also, I never mentioned anything about the rifle, but that's kinda a nice touch.

I don't know what to say about TRANS BRC. Both look liable to be seen official translation of a game so yeah... Well, I CAN tell tell that the top one looks like it's saying TRANSBRCPRESENTS:, but I'm sure sure you were tight on space there considering the size of the original screenshot and all screenshots following it. I guess my suggestion for that is, if you can't get the "Presents" part in there smoothly, then it's probably safe to just take it off.
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #321 on: March 09, 2011, 06:16:15 pm »


Anyone wanna play with that a bit? The only thing I need is to change the "V" in Juvei to "B" in the same style...

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #322 on: March 10, 2011, 06:58:51 pm »
Is this okay?


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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #323 on: March 10, 2011, 07:02:20 pm »
The "b" looks upside-down and the holes look wrong.
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #324 on: March 11, 2011, 01:44:16 am »
You're right, it does look upside down.  :P

It's a little difficult getting the perspective right, because the top's sloped and the bottom is flat. I hope this one looks better.



The holes in the "B" still looked a little off though, maybe a little bit too big. So, I made one with the holes a little bit smaller as well.


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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #325 on: March 11, 2011, 02:10:09 am »
Silly suggestion: try making them narrow, vertical holes, like in the "S" in "quest".
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #326 on: March 11, 2011, 03:01:31 am »
The B looks wrong because you’re still using the outline of the V. It will keep looking wrong until the outline is the shape of a B.

The holes should look (perspective-wise) like they line up with the holes of the first E; the holes in the second E should give you a rough idea as to what the holes in the B should look like.
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #327 on: March 11, 2011, 05:19:47 pm »

This has the "Trans BRC Presents:" shading brightened up and the black box eliminated. I think it makes it a bit less gibberish looking.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #328 on: March 12, 2011, 04:20:50 pm »
Out of sheer boredom I started hacking this game for one last time, modifying all the shooter stages. I made this custom version of the boss rush stage.





Only thing is I want to update this hack in the database, and get rid of the previous 1.0 version, how does one do this.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #329 on: March 12, 2011, 04:29:40 pm »
Edit the entry and submit a new version.
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #330 on: March 12, 2011, 09:24:41 pm »
@aishsha: Here's my attempt. I feel that something isn't right about the first E now, though.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #331 on: March 14, 2011, 12:03:43 pm »
And I actually love the last one... Thanks for your help, guys!

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #332 on: March 25, 2011, 02:23:43 am »

Good job, Matrizzle!

Now if I can fight the urge to change that to "JEDIQUEST" ... >:D
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #333 on: March 25, 2011, 03:39:17 am »
That one is awesome Matrizzle!  :thumbsup:

I guess I'll stick with my Gameboy Titlescreens for now.  :P

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #334 on: March 25, 2011, 04:07:33 am »
@aishsha: Here's my attempt. I feel that something isn't right about the first E now, though.


That first E looks just a tiny bit large when looking at it on the left next to the B.  Perhaps that's kind of what you're talking about? 

I didn't notice anything until I read that you thought something wasn't right about it.

It looks great though overall.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #335 on: March 25, 2011, 01:54:53 pm »
Well, if you need a technical explanation: the laws of perspective dictate that if the left side of the ‘E’ is supposed to appear straight, it needs to form a line converging on the same point as the straight-up portions of the other letters.
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #336 on: April 04, 2011, 08:50:22 pm »
I'm only about 9 months behind on getting this done, but what the hell:



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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #337 on: April 14, 2011, 12:20:32 am »


Finally got around to hacking this in. The title never said from myth to laughter, but just parodius da in japanese. Didn't really make sense to put that in english, so we ended up going with the subtitle the game was given. I think it turned out pretty good.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #338 on: April 14, 2011, 12:39:06 am »


Finally got around to hacking this in. The title never said from myth to laughter, but just parodius da in japanese. Didn't really make sense to put that in english, so we ended up going with the subtitle the game was given. I think it turned out pretty good.

If you didn't actually type out what the text says, there's no way in a thousand years I would be able to tell that that says. It's just a big blob of pink. Maybe find a way to split the words up some more?

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #339 on: April 14, 2011, 02:53:13 am »
No need to split them, it's the colors that need a bit of change. If you make one of them darker or clearer, then it would be easier to read.

I don't really agree with the subtitle though because that's the subtitle of the the Super Famicom version (and only that version). It' should be called "It's Parodius" because that's what Parodius Da! means.