Author Topic: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only] (Read 709398 times)

bobonga · « **Reply #240 on:** July 31, 2010, 09:35:27 am »

I agree with DarknessSavior. "Legend of Valkyrie" sounds better than the other possibilities.

DarknessSavior · « **Reply #241 on:** July 31, 2010, 01:52:11 pm »

Quote from: Azkadellia on July 31, 2010, 05:17:31 am

DarknessSavior:

Is this good enough, or is it too much?

The only thing that I don't like are the lower-case and upper-case "s". They're very hard to read. If you could improve on that, I think it looks great.

~DS

KingMike · « **Reply #242 on:** July 31, 2010, 02:42:43 pm »

I'd agree, the "s" in Crusade looks almost like an f.

Tauwasser · « **Reply #243 on:** July 31, 2010, 02:48:43 pm »

Never heard of fraktur you mussels?

I find it very readable and think it fits really well, actually.

cYa,

Tauwasser

BRPXQZME · « **Reply #244 on:** July 31, 2010, 11:02:55 pm »

Quote from: Tauwasser on July 31, 2010, 02:48:43 pm

Never heard of fraktur you mussels?

Interesting epithet there

reyvgm · « **Reply #245 on:** August 01, 2010, 03:37:00 am »

Quote from: Gemini on July 31, 2010, 04:44:37 am

Quote from: reyvgm on July 23, 2010, 11:53:42 pm
Top Katakana reads "Valkyrie no"
Pretty sure it's Walküre, not Valkyrie (reference). Same word, different languages.

The character seems to be officially called Valkyrie, so I guess the title should be called like that too.

Deets · « **Reply #246 on:** August 01, 2010, 10:44:58 am »

Quote from: Azkadellia on July 31, 2010, 05:17:31 am

DarknessSavior:

Is this good enough, or is it too much?

I don't mind the "s," but the letters definitely need anti-aliasing.

Garoth Moulinoski · « **Reply #247 on:** August 01, 2010, 12:31:27 pm »

Quote from: KingMike on July 31, 2010, 02:42:43 pm

I'd agree, the "s" in Crusade looks almost like an f.

This. I read The Crufade for Eilence.

BRPXQZME · « **Reply #248 on:** August 01, 2010, 01:14:47 pm »

If anything, I think the main problem with the long s is that it’s inconsistent with every other blackletter “s” you see on the screen—including in the title.

reyvgm · « **Reply #249 on:** August 01, 2010, 03:42:40 pm »

Why not use the same font used for the text, but a bit bigger?

FlashPV · « **Reply #250 on:** August 03, 2010, 12:51:50 pm »

Ok this one gave me some hard time but I think it's not bad:

golden · « **Reply #251 on:** August 03, 2010, 04:42:33 pm »

Quote from: FlashPV on August 03, 2010, 12:51:50 pm

Ok this one gave me some hard time but I think it's not bad:

Looks amazing to me! The way you fit the red orb and the wings - you're the titlescreen champion indeed

KaioShin · « **Reply #252 on:** August 03, 2010, 04:47:59 pm »

Quote from: Tauwasser on July 31, 2010, 02:48:43 pm

Never heard of fraktur you mussels?

I find it very readable and think it fits really well, actually.

cYa,

Tauwasser

reyvgm · « **Reply #253 on:** August 04, 2010, 04:17:37 pm »

Quote from: FlashPV on August 03, 2010, 12:51:50 pm

Ok this one gave me some hard time but I think it's not bad:

It looks amazing!
Thanks master FlashVP!

KingMike · « **Reply #254 on:** August 16, 2010, 01:39:04 am »

Anybody want to try this one?
The game is Masked Ninja Hanamaru.
Limitations I see is: the yellow color past the 16-pixel border is drawn as a sprite.
Green and blue are in separate palettes (and thus can't be in the same 16x16 boundary), but red can be mixed with either.
However, the yellowish color can't be mixed with anything in a 16x16 boundary.
Thanks.

FlashPV · « **Reply #255 on:** August 25, 2010, 11:13:39 am »

Since nobody is willing to help you here is my version:

August 29, 2010, 02:09:34 am - (Auto Merged - Double Posts are not allowed before 7 days.)

Something was bugging me in my first version so here's another one (better I think):

Garoth Moulinoski · « **Reply #256 on:** August 29, 2010, 05:40:58 pm »

Quote from: FlashPV on August 25, 2010, 11:13:39 am

Since nobody is willing to help you here is my version:
[img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/5636/maskedninjahanamaru.png[/mg]

August 29, 2010, 02:09:34 am - (Auto Merged - Double Posts are not allowed before 7 days.)
Something was bugging me in my first version so here's another one (better I think):
[img]http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5636/maskedninjahanamaru.png[/mg]

Strange, the new one's not showing up (at least for me).

Edit: Whops, there it goes!

DarknessSavior · « **Reply #257 on:** August 29, 2010, 06:09:59 pm »

That'd be because he named them the same thing. So he accidentally deleted the other one.

~DS

Tauwasser · « **Reply #258 on:** August 29, 2010, 10:18:22 pm »

The new one has italics while the old one doesn't. He didn't overwrite the file, the paths are different while the file names are indeed the same.
I personally feel that the new one is better. Now it just needs proper holes in the As. Just compare the A to R. Usually the hole in R should be only a slight bit bigger if, not like that.

cYa,

Tauwasser

Cryomancer · « **Reply #259 on:** August 30, 2010, 01:34:07 am »

So you want him to improve his A holes?