Author Topic: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only] (Read 478799 times)

Vanya · « **Reply #100 on:** October 27, 2008, 06:50:24 pm »

This should be the final version.

Kitsune Sniper · « **Reply #101 on:** October 28, 2008, 11:42:45 pm »

Quote from: Malias on October 27, 2008, 04:29:51 pm

Overall, the title screen looks great. The smaller letters look kind of weird though, especially the 'R' and a little with the 'E.' And the "or" between start and continue looks out of place.

That "OR" is Konami's doing, not mine. I'm not moving it.

As for the love soldier bit... I know they look weird. Maybe once I get the stuff reinserted and rearranged I'll tinker with it.

Vanya · « **Reply #102 on:** October 29, 2008, 09:47:00 am »

New title revision:

Dr. Mario · « **Reply #103 on:** October 30, 2008, 04:23:42 am »

I've seen this on other boards too, but I have to say that it is down right beautiful. I will say the "Load Game" has me a little worried. If you plan on having a save feature, I suggest making two versions of the hack. One with and one without. Can't make a cart out of one with a save feature as easily...

Vanya · « **Reply #104 on:** October 30, 2008, 02:05:44 pm »

Hmmm... I hadn't thought of that. Sure I'll make 2 then. I'll leave the save feature for last then. thanks for bringing that up, dude! =)

KungFuFurby · « **Reply #105 on:** November 07, 2008, 04:28:49 pm »

Hmm... the only one I can think of is the R in Soldier that might need twaking. The others are OK with me.

KingMike · « **Reply #106 on:** November 07, 2008, 06:09:07 pm »

Might also want to move the TM so it's not floating in the middle of nowhere.

(or remove it. But I can't remember if you or someone else advised against removing TM markings for fear of legal wraith.)

Dr. Mario · « **Reply #107 on:** November 11, 2008, 08:57:20 am »

Trying to make something a little more streamlined than what I used to have...

Killa B · « **Reply #108 on:** November 11, 2008, 08:14:56 pm »

Quote from: Dr. Mario on November 11, 2008, 08:57:20 am

[img]http://d.imagehost.org/0501/logo.png[/img]
Trying to make something a little more streamlined than what I used to have...

Looks like a nice shape so far. I really liked the setup of your old logo, though. (Forgive my lack of knowledge of art-terms <_<) It would be great if you could have this logo, but with a similar presentation to the first one. Do you still have the white color available?

Tauwasser · « **Reply #109 on:** November 13, 2008, 07:32:48 am »

Might I suggest trimming the ō macron a bit? Other than that it looks pretty nice if you're working in confined space

cYa,

Tauwasser

Zeemis · « **Reply #110 on:** December 15, 2008, 10:40:14 pm »

Just a little something from my total conversion hack of FFVI.

justin3009 · « **Reply #111 on:** December 28, 2008, 01:26:30 pm »

O_O...That's sexy

Solid One · « **Reply #112 on:** January 25, 2009, 10:18:34 pm »

It took me almost all saturday, but now it's done.

Kiyoshi Aman · « **Reply #113 on:** January 26, 2009, 05:25:00 am »

God, that is hard to read. Good work nonetheless, though.

KingMike · « **Reply #114 on:** February 06, 2009, 11:52:48 pm »

Any designers want to try this one, The Milky Way Trio?
There's a star that flashes out of the middle of "ga" (the square shape near the left middle).
Otherwise, I think I've the hacking work on all parts of the game accessible within a few minutes.
Leaving actually playing this and formatting the script and such.

FlashPV · « **Reply #115 on:** February 09, 2009, 09:02:23 am »

What's the japanese title of this game? Maybe I'll give it a try.

KingMike · « **Reply #116 on:** February 09, 2009, 09:10:50 am »

Ginga no Sannin.
NES port by Nintendo of an obscure Enix space RPG "Earth Fighter Rayizer" (or maybe Raizer).

FlashPV · « **Reply #117 on:** February 12, 2009, 09:29:04 am »

First draw.

Tauwasser · « **Reply #118 on:** February 12, 2009, 09:43:16 am »

It's really hard to read IMO. You should maybe make it less italic. Like, maybe add 1/3 of "straightness" to each vertically straight edge or something... Also, wouldn't it would probably look better if the letters were larger and the the maybe inset in the m's legs or something..

cYa,

Tauwasser

FlashPV · « **Reply #119 on:** February 28, 2009, 08:41:08 am »

Ok it's no longer italic and it's more readable this way. What do you think?