Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]

[azoreseuropa]

I've tried something here:

Maybe that'll be usable

I like it. Much better.

[Pennywise]

This is probably the final version of the title screen.

[KingMike]

I've actually got a revision by FlashPV that I really like, but some attribute table hacking needs to be done before it's finalized. I'll post it once it's done. SD Gundam Adventures is a title aishsha and I decided on what to translate Gaiden as. It's a bit of a localization, but I thought it sounded better than Gaiden or Side Story.

Isn't Superior Defender an official localization of "SD Gundam"? I think that's what a couple of the DVDs I have are called.
Unless the point is that it itself is a spinoff of SD Gundam?

[Orochi Kusanagi]

Superior Defender was used for the anime SD Gundam Force in the US. I've never seen it used for other SD Gundam related products though.

The reason why this is SD Gundam Gaiden is because it was, along with the SD Sengokuden line which released around the same time, the first SD Gundam projects to be based off of some original designs, such as this one making them knights and giving them a fantasy/Dragon Quest feel. So it was a departure from the usual SD Gundam models and so on.

Good luck on the project! I can't wait to play this one in english.

[lionhats]

These aren't much just something I did in a short time, I am going release them in a new Abandon Pack I'm working on.

for Youkai Douchuuki I wanted to do this for awhile but finally just did it while I was bored. Is hard to tell but it reads Mario I secretly call the game "Mario 25" anyway.



Then I was planning to Hack Ultima : Exodus for Nes and came up with this



I have some other stuff but would fall out side this topic. Any Criticism's are fine.

Not being funny, but would love to do an ultima hack for NES/snes/SMS that turns it into a game in the elder scrolls universe .  The master system one would be the most true I think. Names of locations items characters lore etc, would anyone be down to work on it with me,?

[Choppasmith]

Okay, my FIRST EVER title screen hack, still a WIP



Part of my RE-Quest Hack of DW1. I actually managed to find the font that's used for the logo and old promo materials (Rustikalis) I made a mockup in Photoshop to give myself an idea



It's still not exactly 1:1, and my inexperience made it hard to properly translate my graphic into 8 Bit. Still proud for my first title screen hack ever. Does it look center or should I move it over a tile?

Edit: Quick tweak. Much better, not sure if I could improve it anymore at my level of skill



Still wondering if I should move the QUEST tiles right or the TM tiles left.

[I.C.H.I.]

I'm very happy to be able to post on this thread! Here's my first edit of my favorite game's title screen, huge thanks to Krishty whose tools made this possible!

It deserves better font. This one is way too generic.

[Bonesy]

We'd love to see your take on a title screen for the game!

[Petuuuhhh]

https://imgur.com/a/RIx4Dec
A mock-up title screen for my ROM hack in progress, Pokémon FireRed Redux. The Omega symbol will be removed.

[DragonSpikeXIII]

It deserves better font. This one is way too generic.

Thank you for your criticism, no sarcasm, it is a fact that the font is nothing special or unique but it is the one I envisioned for that sub-title (the International Edition part). Space (height) restrictions also played a huge part. Nonetheless, there's still time before release so I'll try asking some people from the AC community for suggestions.

[Rodimus Primal]

Okay, my FIRST EVER title screen hack, still a WIP



Part of my RE-Quest Hack of DW1. I actually managed to find the font that's used for the logo and old promo materials (Rustikalis) I made a mockup in Photoshop to give myself an idea



It's still not exactly 1:1, and my inexperience made it hard to properly translate my graphic into 8 Bit. Still proud for my first title screen hack ever. Does it look center or should I move it over a tile?

Edit: Quick tweak. Much better, not sure if I could improve it anymore at my level of skill



Still wondering if I should move the QUEST tiles right or the TM tiles left.

This looks good though if possible I would move Quest a bit to the right. It's a little too close to Dragon.

[torridgristle]

Edit: Quick tweak. Much better, not sure if I could improve it anymore at my level of skill



Still wondering if I should move the QUEST tiles right or the TM tiles left.

It looks a lot better without the light gray speckles in my opinion. Also thought maybe the dragon should be chunkier and put at the side, and if there's room maybe a tail on the other end to balance it more, and also maybe the video mode could be changed to not have the black bar on the left at the title screen.

[Choppasmith]

Wasn't expecting a month delay in feedback. XD Thanks though.

I actually JUST tweaked it.

It looks a lot better without the light gray speckles in my opinion. Also thought maybe the dragon should be chunkier and put at the side, and if there's room maybe a tail on the other end to balance it more, and also maybe the video mode could be changed to not have the black bar on the left at the title screen.

I agree it looks better, but I believe the speckled tiles are shared with other graphics on the game (either water or sand). And I wouldn't have a clue how to remove that bar. But I did free up a couple tiles from the new letters.

I might have to look into adding the Dragon like that though. Maybe adding the tail like the GBC title screen.

[torridgristle]

I agree it looks better, but I believe the speckled tiles are shared with other graphics on the game (either water or sand). And I wouldn't have a clue how to remove that bar. But I did free up a couple tiles from the new letters.

In the PRG ROM there's a sequence of bytes what go 20 5B BD A9 01 20 87 C5 A9 18 8D 01 20. Change it to 20 5B BD A9 01 20 87 C5 A9 1E 8D 01 20. The black bar sticks around in the game though which might be for the best, I'm not sure what visual glitches exist under it. The title screen is safe though.

[KingMike]

To hide scrolling glitches (the reason it was even added to the hardware was because of glitches). I think that also obscures sprites walking off the edge of the screen. Or is a different bit of that register.

[Orochi Kusanagi]

I'm working on a new title screen for a GB game called Hal Wrestling. I want to name it Wrestling Summit which took place in 1990 at the Tokyo Dome.



Any thoughts on it? Any changes that should happen? This is just a mock up atm, but I've already tinkered with the tiles. I just didn't put this version in yet.

[torridgristle]

I'm working on a new title screen for a GB game called Hal Wrestling. I want to name it Wrestling Summit which took place in 1990 at the Tokyo Dome.



Any thoughts on it? Any changes that should happen? This is just a mock up atm, but I've already tinkered with the tiles. I just didn't put this version in yet.

You might like it with a smaller font for the corporate info.


Here's the font I used.

It came from Hoyle Casino for the Game Boy.

[CobraMJD]

I'm bored. Happy new year.

Happy new year from the future!

I'm working on a new title screen for a GB game called Hal Wrestling. I want to name it Wrestling Summit which took place in 1990 at the Tokyo Dome.



Any thoughts on it? Any changes that should happen? This is just a mock up atm, but I've already tinkered with the tiles. I just didn't put this version in yet.

Very cool.
Just noted that the S from Summit is bigger than the others letters, the W could be bigger a well, maybe.

[matt!]

Happy new year from the future!Very cool.
Just noted that the S from Summit is bigger than the others letters, the W could be bigger a well, maybe.

The W already is, but it's less noticeable.

[Googie]

In the original hack Luigi's name was higher, so I lowered it to match with the word Bros.

Looks better now in my opinion.