The Glory of Heracles text leaves a little to be desired in my opinion. It feels a bit "default font" thrown in.
Stylistically, I'm really not feeling the choice to go sans-serif on it. Something more Romanesque with chisel serifs would be more suiting, I'd say, and with small caps instead of proper casing for the title.
Technically, the banding caused by skewing such narrow text at that resolution is the biggest problem. Also, the Japanese screen shows more depth on the letters, and seems to use its palette to not only anti-alias its hard edges, but to also introduce a second light source from behind, as seen on the grey planes of the characters.
Maybe that can help some.