Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]

[FlashPV]

Same with the background.

[UglyJoe]

It kinda looks like "Slong of the Angel" to me, but it is pretty.

[FlashPV]

Hum.. You're right so here it is:

[Garoth Moulinoski]

Anybody wanna try their hand at this?



(Bigger picture here for clearer viewing)

Its supposed to read "Super Robot Pinball". I don't care too much but I suppose it'd be nice to have it anyhow... Maybe the Japanese and English characters can be switched? So that it reads the title in big red English and the Japanese in teeny tiny white? :/

I'd do it myself but more likely than not, it'll come out looking terrible which is why I'm posting it here. :P

[DarknessSavior]

I certainly like Garoth's idea of keeping the Japanese in, but making it be the smaller of the two. ^_^

~DS

[FlashPV]

I'm not sure for the japanese but I guess you'll like this one.

[DaMarsMan]

Hum.. You're right so here it is:
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/930/tenshinouta2qh2.png
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/9283/tenshinoutashirokitsubaep6.png

Great job! These look perfect.

[Garoth Moulinoski]

I'm not sure for the japanese but I guess you'll like this one.

O.O Not only was that fast, it's great too! Thank you alot, FlashPV!

[FlashPV]

No problem just try to write my name correctly next time   

[Garoth Moulinoski]

Inserted it! (Finally got around to it)


I really like it! n_n Really nice and everything. And I didn't have to insert it twice like I thought I would (I didn't notice before, but the second "titlescreen" I saw was too small. I didn't see any Japanese -> English when I tried the game either, so I'm not touching it at all).

No problem just try to write my name correctly next time   

Heh heh! XD Oops. But I knew it was FLASH and not PLASH... My finger... uh... ... it slipped... O_o???

[Tauwasser]

Your G has a pixel too much, unlike all the other G's out there

cYa,

Tauwasser

[Garoth Moulinoski]

Dang, I was like "Where?!" Yeah, I added that in there. I think its okay like that since I made all the highlighted options' G's have that extra pixel. Do you think it's bad?

[Kajitani-Eizan]

is it me, or do the letter widths vary wildly? it doesn't look like one cohesive font... wait, are those two different 'o' styles and two different 'e' styles i see?

[CaseCrash]

is it me, or do the letter widths vary wildly? it doesn't look like one cohesive font... wait, are those two different 'o' styles and two different 'e' styles i see?

I think its okay like that since I made all the highlighted options' G's have that extra pixel.

I think he just made a highlighted and non-highlighted font, with the former supposed to feel larger and perhaps 'closer'
</wild theorizing>

[Garoth Moulinoski]

is it me, or do the letter widths vary wildly? it doesn't look like one cohesive font... wait, are those two different 'o' styles and two different 'e' styles i see?

I think its okay like that since I made all the highlighted options' G's have that extra pixel.

I think he just made a highlighted and non-highlighted font, with the former supposed to feel larger and perhaps 'closer'
</wild theorizing>

Exactly it. That and that I had to do the writing by hand (mouse?) so I had to do this all in clicky clicky. Maybe a real hacker could've done faster and in a more efficient way but whatever. But I'll go back in and change the G's if they don't look nice.

[KaioShin]

What has a "real" hacker to do with graphic editing? I couldn't do anything graphically myself...

[KingMike]

One 'M' has an extra pixel.

But overall, good job.
Feel glad, editing graphical text is a pain (I still haven't gotten the nerve to finish a game called Pikinya! for SNES. It only has about a billion pieces of graphics text. )

[Panzer88]

What has a "real" hacker to do with graphic editing? I couldn't do anything graphically myself...

you type command code and beautiful pictures come out, you don't have to draw with your hand,you've got your mind powers /sarcasm

[UglyJoe]

you type command code and beautiful pictures come out

<3 Logo

[Garoth Moulinoski]

One 'M' has an extra pixel.

Saw it, thanks!

But overall, good job.
Feel glad, editing graphical text is a pain (I still haven't gotten the nerve to finish a game called Pikinya! for SNES. It only has about a billion pieces of graphics text. )

I guess that makes me feel better... If you'd like, I could try my hand at whatever it is you need (although I won't promise anything)

What has a "real" hacker to do with graphic editing? I couldn't do anything graphically myself...

you type command code and beautiful pictures come out, you don't have to draw with your hand,you've got your mind powers /sarcasm

Err, yeah. XD Sometimes my brain farts and stupidity takes over. XD (Funny thing, as I tried writing "stupidity", the words got jumbled twenty times before I got it down to how it was! Talk about making a point!!)