Author Topic: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only] (Read 258846 times)

FlashPV · « **Reply #20 on:** January 02, 2008, 05:57:17 pm »

Same with the background.

UglyJoe · « **Reply #21 on:** January 03, 2008, 08:54:39 am »

It kinda looks like "Slong of the Angel" to me, but it is pretty.

FlashPV · « **Reply #22 on:** February 04, 2008, 05:20:06 am »

Hum.. You're right so here it is:

Garoth Moulinoski · « **Reply #23 on:** February 04, 2008, 08:33:10 am »

Anybody wanna try their hand at this?

(Bigger picture here for clearer viewing)

Its supposed to read "Super Robot Pinball". I don't care too much but I suppose it'd be nice to have it anyhow... Maybe the Japanese and English characters can be switched? So that it reads the title in big red English and the Japanese in teeny tiny white? :/

I'd do it myself but more likely than not, it'll come out looking terrible which is why I'm posting it here. :P

DarknessSavior · « **Reply #24 on:** February 04, 2008, 08:53:42 am »

I certainly like Garoth's idea of keeping the Japanese in, but making it be the smaller of the two. ^_^

~DS

FlashPV · « **Reply #25 on:** February 04, 2008, 11:07:17 am »

I'm not sure for the japanese but I guess you'll like this one.

DaMarsMan · « **Reply #26 on:** February 04, 2008, 11:19:46 am »

Quote from: FlashPV on February 04, 2008, 05:20:06 am

Hum.. You're right so here it is:
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/930/tenshinouta2qh2.png
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/9283/tenshinoutashirokitsubaep6.png

Great job! These look perfect.

Garoth Moulinoski · « **Reply #27 on:** February 04, 2008, 05:36:07 pm »

Quote from: FlashPV on February 04, 2008, 11:07:17 am

I'm not sure for the japanese but I guess you'll like this one.

O.O Not only was that fast, it's great too! Thank you alot, FlashPV!

FlashPV · « **Reply #28 on:** February 04, 2008, 06:33:57 pm »

No problem just try to write my name correctly next time

Garoth Moulinoski · « **Reply #29 on:** February 09, 2008, 08:13:58 pm »

Inserted it! (Finally got around to it)

I really like it! n_n Really nice and everything. And I didn't have to insert it twice like I thought I would (I didn't notice before, but the second "titlescreen" I saw was too small. I didn't see any Japanese -> English when I tried the game either, so I'm not touching it at all).

Quote from: FlashPV on February 04, 2008, 06:33:57 pm

No problem just try to write my name correctly next time

Heh heh! XD Oops. But I knew it was FLASH and not PLASH... My finger... uh... ... it slipped... O_o???

Tauwasser · « **Reply #30 on:** February 10, 2008, 02:39:06 am »

Your G has a pixel too much, unlike all the other G's out there

cYa,

Tauwasser

Garoth Moulinoski · « **Reply #31 on:** February 10, 2008, 09:38:48 am »

Dang, I was like "Where?!" Yeah, I added that in there. I think its okay like that since I made all the highlighted options' G's have that extra pixel. Do you think it's bad?

Kajitani-Eizan · « **Reply #32 on:** February 11, 2008, 08:16:17 am »

is it me, or do the letter widths vary wildly? it doesn't look like one cohesive font... wait, are those two different 'o' styles and two different 'e' styles i see?

CaseCrash · « **Reply #33 on:** February 11, 2008, 12:27:56 pm »

Quote from: Kajitani-Eizan on February 11, 2008, 08:16:17 am

is it me, or do the letter widths vary wildly? it doesn't look like one cohesive font... wait, are those two different 'o' styles and two different 'e' styles i see?

Quote from: Garoth Moulinoski on February 10, 2008, 09:38:48 am

I think its okay like that since I made all the highlighted options' G's have that extra pixel.

I think he just made a highlighted and non-highlighted font, with the former supposed to feel larger and perhaps 'closer'
</wild theorizing>

Garoth Moulinoski · « **Reply #34 on:** February 11, 2008, 05:23:44 pm »

Quote from: CaseCrash on February 11, 2008, 12:27:56 pm

Quote from: Kajitani-Eizan on February 11, 2008, 08:16:17 am
is it me, or do the letter widths vary wildly? it doesn't look like one cohesive font... wait, are those two different 'o' styles and two different 'e' styles i see?

Quote from: Garoth Moulinoski on February 10, 2008, 09:38:48 am
I think its okay like that since I made all the highlighted options' G's have that extra pixel.

I think he just made a highlighted and non-highlighted font, with the former supposed to feel larger and perhaps 'closer'
</wild theorizing>

Exactly it. That and that I had to do the writing by hand (mouse?) so I had to do this all in clicky clicky. Maybe a real hacker could've done faster and in a more efficient way but whatever.

But I'll go back in and change the G's if they don't look nice.

KaioShin · « **Reply #35 on:** February 11, 2008, 05:24:49 pm »

What has a "real" hacker to do with graphic editing? I couldn't do anything graphically myself...

KingMike · « **Reply #36 on:** February 11, 2008, 09:19:54 pm »

One 'M' has an extra pixel.

But overall, good job.
Feel glad, editing graphical text is a pain (I still haven't gotten the nerve to finish a game called Pikinya! for SNES. It only has about a billion pieces of graphics text.

)

Panzer88 · « **Reply #37 on:** February 12, 2008, 12:03:30 am »

Quote from: KaioShin on February 11, 2008, 05:24:49 pm

What has a "real" hacker to do with graphic editing? I couldn't do anything graphically myself...

you type command code and beautiful pictures come out, you don't have to draw with your hand,you've got your mind powers /sarcasm

UglyJoe · « **Reply #38 on:** February 12, 2008, 12:36:17 am »

Quote from: Panzer88 on February 12, 2008, 12:03:30 am

you type command code and beautiful pictures come out

<3 Logo

Garoth Moulinoski · « **Reply #39 on:** February 12, 2008, 09:45:33 pm »

Quote from: KingMike on February 11, 2008, 09:19:54 pm

One 'M' has an extra pixel.

Saw it, thanks!

Quote from: KingMike on February 11, 2008, 09:19:54 pm

But overall, good job.
Feel glad, editing graphical text is a pain (I still haven't gotten the nerve to finish a game called Pikinya! for SNES. It only has about a billion pieces of graphics text. )

I guess that makes me feel better... If you'd like, I could try my hand at whatever it is you need (although I won't promise anything)

Quote from: Panzer88 on February 12, 2008, 12:03:30 am

Quote from: KaioShin on February 11, 2008, 05:24:49 pm
What has a "real" hacker to do with graphic editing? I couldn't do anything graphically myself...

you type command code and beautiful pictures come out, you don't have to draw with your hand,you've got your mind powers /sarcasm

Err, yeah. XD Sometimes my brain farts and stupidity takes over. XD (Funny thing, as I tried writing "stupidity", the words got jumbled twenty times before I got it down to how it was! Talk about making a point!!)