Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]

[Vanya]

This should be the final version.

[Kitsune Sniper]

Overall, the title screen looks great.  The smaller letters look kind of weird though, especially the 'R' and a little with the 'E.'  And the "or" between start and continue looks out of place.

That "OR" is Konami's doing, not mine. I'm not moving it.

As for the love soldier bit... I know they look weird. Maybe once I get the stuff reinserted and rearranged I'll tinker with it.

[Vanya]

New title revision:

[Dr. Mario]

I've seen this on other boards too, but I have to say that it is down right beautiful. I will say the "Load Game" has me a little worried. If you plan on having a save feature, I suggest making two versions of the hack. One with and one without. Can't make a cart out of one with a save feature as easily...

[Vanya]

Hmmm... I hadn't thought of that. Sure I'll make 2 then. I'll leave the save feature for last then. thanks for bringing that up, dude! =)

[KungFuFurby]

Hmm... the only one I can think of is the R in Soldier that might need twaking. The others are OK with me. 

[KingMike]

Might also want to move the TM so it's not floating in the middle of nowhere.

(or remove it. But I can't remember if you or someone else advised against removing TM markings for fear of legal wraith.)

[Dr. Mario]

Trying to make something a little more streamlined than what I used to have...

[Killa B]

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Trying to make something a little more streamlined than what I used to have...

Looks like a nice shape so far. I really liked the setup of your old logo, though. (Forgive my lack of knowledge of art-terms <_<) It would be great if you could have this logo, but with a similar presentation to the first one. Do you still have the white color available?

[Tauwasser]

Might I suggest trimming the ō macron a bit? Other than that it looks pretty nice if you're working in confined space

cYa,

Tauwasser

[Zeemis]

Just a little something from my total conversion hack of FFVI.

[justin3009]

O_O...That's sexy

[Solid One]

It took me almost all saturday, but now it's done.

[Kiyoshi Aman]

God, that is hard to read. Good work nonetheless, though.

[KingMike]

Any designers want to try this one, The Milky Way Trio?
There's a star that flashes out of the middle of "ga" (the square shape near the left middle).
Otherwise, I think I've the hacking work on all parts of the game accessible within a few minutes.
Leaving actually playing this and formatting the script and such.

[FlashPV]

What's the japanese title of this game? Maybe I'll give it a try.

[KingMike]

Ginga no Sannin.
NES port by Nintendo of an obscure Enix space RPG "Earth Fighter Rayizer" (or maybe Raizer).

[FlashPV]

First draw.

[Tauwasser]

It's really hard to read IMO. You should maybe make it less italic. Like, maybe add 1/3 of "straightness" to each vertically straight edge or something... Also, wouldn't it would probably look better if the letters were larger and the the maybe inset in the m's legs or something..

cYa,

Tauwasser

[FlashPV]

Ok it's no longer italic and it's more readable this way. What do you think?