Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]

Started by FlashPV, January 01, 2008, 06:50:38 AM

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DaMarsMan

Nice work FlashPV

As for DQM.... It looks great but I thought it might look better this way.


KaioShin

Quote from: DaMarsMan on January 01, 2008, 12:52:58 PM
Nice work FlashPV

As for DQM.... It looks great but I thought it might look better this way.



Keep the whole screen in mind when the background and main DQ logo are added to it. The "Monsters" should be centered IMO since it accompanies the main DQ logo and not so much the Caravan Heart logo.
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Garoth Moulinoski

By God... Terry is uglier than sin in DQM... I always get sick when I see DQM's cover... I had thought it was only for the American version of DQM that they used the CG art...
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DaMarsMan

That's true but that capital H gets in the way and makes it look cramped in my opinion. Maybe if you could move the Caravan Heart part down a bit.

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Crysta

Quote from: DaMarsMan on January 01, 2008, 03:08:34 PM
That's true but that capital H gets in the way and makes it look cramped in my opinion. Maybe if you could move the Caravan Heart part down a bit.

Could always shrink the H a pixel or two:



Or use the halfsize H I used before:




Actually I think I prefer the two pixels shorter one. Doesn't look too bad:





KaioShin

Quote from: DaMarsMan on January 01, 2008, 03:55:30 PM
That last one looks perfect.

Absolutely!

I was just about to write that I'd need to see how it looks complete with the background when you posted this.

Thanks  :thumbsup:
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Lilinda

So I guess you have about five people to credit in your readme.... ;)
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KaioShin

Quote from: I.S.T. on January 01, 2008, 04:28:15 PM
So I guess you have about five people to credit in your readme.... ;)

The list is propably 10 pages long anyway, so it doesn't matter anymore  ;)
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FlashPV

It's my new year gift. If you want to use it in your translation then this screen should help you.

Nightcrawler

Sure, I'll use it in the translation. Hopefully I'll finish it in 2008!

Perhaps the 'O' in of and the 'T' in the should be lowercase? Only important words should be capitalized in title I believe.
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DarknessSavior

I second what NC said, it looks MUCH better that way. Great work, Flash. ^_^

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Quote from: Nightcrawler on January 02, 2008, 12:38:21 PMPerhaps the 'O' in of and the 'T' in the should be lowercase? Only important words should be capitalized in title I believe.
The most common way to title case is to capitalize all internal words (i.e. the first word is always capitalized), except articles (e.g. the, a, an), prepositions (e.g. of, in, on, at), conjunctions (e.g. and, but, if, then), and forms of "to be" (e.g. am, are, is, be, was, were). Sometimes pronouns and possessive pronouns will be uncapitalized as well.

More importantly, it's closer to the spirit of cursive (especially the kinds with more curious capitals) to not let capital letters crowd the rest of the writing out, aesthetically. Rules of grammar be damned! They're just guidelines for what looks good.
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