Well that's one bug down.

Anytime you think you found a bug its always good to check if it
occurs on real hardware or one of the most accurate emulators.
Can you edit just one of the strings like how you would in your
translation but using original rom instead and show a picture of
the bug, the data, and pointer for the string? The patch would
also probable help.
I can see the bug with 2 players using H(0x48) instead of a space(0x20)

Do you need the H to move over to the right by 4 tiles on row 0x0D?
Do you have pointers for the names?
It looks like 2 and 3 players need their own string. Would that fix
it instead of them both sharing the same string?

update:
I might be able to write new code so you wouldn't need to add this:
FE 0B 0D 20
FE 13 0D 20
FE 1B 0D 20
I just need the pointers to the names so I can do a test. If I
cant write code for that then I can create a new string so player 2
and player 3 will have their own. I don't even need a patch or more
pictures just those pointers to the names.
September 20, 2020, 06:12:02 pm - (Auto Merged - Double Posts are not allowed before 7 days.)
I think I fixed your bug but I'm not sure since I don't have
a patch for it but here is the code.
original code for storing name on row 0x0D:
Disassembly:
$01/B942 20 7D A3 JSR $A37D [$01:A37D] A:0000 X:0000 Y:0087 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F8 P:envmxdiZcHC:0896 VC:092 00 FL:65527
Disassembly:
$01/A37D 08 PHP A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0044 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A37E C2 30 REP #$30 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0060 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A380 22 52 FD 00 JSL $00FD52[$00:FD52] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0068 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A384 E2 20 SEP #$20 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0084 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A386 A9 80 LDA #$80 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0092 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A388 8D 15 21 STA $2115 [$01:2115] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0100 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A38B C2 20 REP #$20 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0116 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A38D AF CC 21 7E LDA $7E21CC[$7E:21CC] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0124 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A391 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0132 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A392 AA TAX A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0140 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A393 BF CE 21 7E LDA $7E21CE,x[$7E:22AE] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0148 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A397 4A LSR A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0156 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A398 4A LSR A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0164 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A399 4A LSR A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0172 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A39A 8D D6 00 STA $00D6 [$01:00D6] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0180 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A39D BF D6 21 7E LDA $7E21D6,x[$7E:22B6] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0188 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3A1 29 F8 FF AND #$FFF8 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0196 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3A4 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0204 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3A5 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0212 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3A6 18 CLC A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0220 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3A7 6D D6 00 ADC $00D6 [$01:00D6] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0228 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3AA 69 E0 00 ADC #$00E0 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0236 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3AD 69 00 40 ADC #$4000 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0244 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3B0 8D 16 21 STA $2116 [$01:2116] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0252 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3B3 AF 64 21 7E LDA $7E2164[$7E:2164] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0260 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3B7 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0268 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3B8 AA TAX A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0276 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3B9 BF 80 21 7E LDA $7E2180,x[$7E:2260] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0284 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3BD 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0292 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3BE 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0300 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3BF 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0308 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3C0 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0316 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3C1 AA TAX A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0324 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3C2 A0 05 00 LDY #$0005 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0332 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3C5 E2 20 SEP #$20 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0348 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3C7 BF 84 A7 01 LDA $01A784,x[$01:A864] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0356 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3CB C2 20 REP #$20 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0372 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3CD 29 3F 00 AND #$003F A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0380 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3D0 18 CLC A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0388 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3D1 69 00 02 ADC #$0200 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0396 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3D4 09 00 20 ORA #$2000 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0404 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3D7 8D 18 21 STA $2118 [$01:2118] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0412 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3DA E8 INX A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0420 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3DB 88 DEY A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0428 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3DC 10 E7 BPL $E7 [$A3C5] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0436 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3DE 28 PLP A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0444 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/A3DF 60 RTS A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0452 VC:000 00 FL:65524
new code for storing name on row 0x0D:
Disassembly:
$01/B942 20 00 FF JSR $FF00 [$01:FF00] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0460 VC:000 00 FL:65524
Disassembly:
$01/FF00 08 PHP A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0476 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF01 C2 30 REP #$30 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0492 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF03 22 52 FD 00 JSL $00FD52[$00:FD52] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0500 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF07 E2 20 SEP #$20 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0516 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF09 A9 80 LDA #$80 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0524 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF0B 8D 15 21 STA $2115 [$01:2115] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0532 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF0E C2 20 REP #$20 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0548 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF10 AF CC 21 7E LDA $7E21CC[$7E:21CC] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0556 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF14 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0564 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF15 AA TAX A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0572 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF16 BF CE 21 7E LDA $7E21CE,x[$7E:22AE] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0580 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF1A 4A LSR A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0588 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF1B 4A LSR A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0596 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF1C 4A LSR A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0604 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF1D 8D D6 00 STA $00D6 [$01:00D6] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0612 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF20 BF D6 21 7E LDA $7E21D6,x[$7E:22B6] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0620 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF24 29 F8 FF AND #$FFF8 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0628 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF27 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0636 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF28 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0644 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF29 18 CLC A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0652 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF2A 6D D6 00 ADC $00D6 [$01:00D6] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0660 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF2D 69 E0 00 ADC #$00E0 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0668 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF30 69 00 40 ADC #$4000 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0676 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF33 8D 16 21 STA $2116 [$01:2116] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0684 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF36 AF 64 21 7E LDA $7E2164[$7E:2164] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0692 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF3A 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0700 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF3B AA TAX A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0708 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF3C BF 80 21 7E LDA $7E2180,x[$7E:2260] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0716 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF40 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0724 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF41 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0732 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF42 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0740 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF43 0A ASL A A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0748 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF44 AA TAX A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0756 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF45 A0 05 00 LDY #$0005 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0764 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF48 E2 20 SEP #$20 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0780 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF4A BF 84 A7 01 LDA $01A784,x[$01:A864] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0788 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF4E C2 20 REP #$20 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envMxdizcHC:0804 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF50 29 3F 00 AND #$003F A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0812 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF53 18 CLC A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0820 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF54 69 00 02 ADC #$0200 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0828 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF57 09 00 20 ORA #$2000 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0836 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF5A 8D 18 21 STA $2118 [$01:2118] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0844 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF5D E8 INX A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0852 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF5E 88 DEY A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0860 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF5F 10 E7 BPL $E7 [$FF48] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0868 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF61 A9 20 22 LDA #$2220 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0876 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF64 8D 18 21 STA $2118 [$01:2118] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0884 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF67 28 PLP A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0892 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF68 60 RTS A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0900 VC:000 00 FL:65524
The code is all the same except for these 2 lines:
$01/FF61 A9 20 22 LDA #$2220 A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0876 VC:000 00 FL:65524
$01/FF64 8D 18 21 STA $2118 [$01:2118] A:2002 X:00E0 Y:0086 D:0000 DB:01 S:01F2 P:envmxdizcHC:0884 VC:000 00 FL:65524
With this code you shouldn't need to add this to your string:
FE 0B 0D 20
FE 13 0D 20
FE 1B 0D 20
Here is the patch:
+bug+#4+fix.ips/file]http://www.mediafire.com/file/jw1x2yfjz4xldzl/Micro+Machines+(U)+[!]+bug+#4+fix.ips/file