« on: July 01, 2020, 07:30:06 am »
Hello. I love this patch. I just noticed a few errors in the script and wanted to point them out. I looked in the topic and didn't find them, so sorry if these are redundant. All of these are from the latest version on the site.
1: There's a merchant in Ladatorm, and his dialogue was okay before I applied the newest patch. Now it says 'Rumor has it, entire townshave bbeen destroyed by the monsters.' I'm not good at grammar, but I think I'd remove that comma too.
2: A red soldier in Rimuldar: 'Ismonstera sword in the land that can pierce the Dragon King's body?' Should this be 'Is there a sword' instead?
3: When you use the stairs command with no stairs: 'here are no stairs here..'
Those were the obvious ones. A couple more that just seemed slightly awkward to me...
1: Girl in Rimuldar: 'Chun is already late meeting me.' I have no idea how else to phrase it, but it seems a little weird. Maybe it's just me.
2: Soldier in Ladatorm: 'If you want to take a break, visit the king and record in the Adventure Log.' IMO this would be more natural if he said 'record your journey' or something. It's obvious what he means by context/experience though.
Please keep up the good work.
Edit is the puff puff girl in Rimuldar incomplete? She doesn't give me a choice, just asks the question. I was looking forward to it. XD