Alright, so I just finished my playthrough and had the greatest time ever with this translation! Thank you to everyone involved for making such a great update to the original.
Anyway, here are my last two nitpicks.
I feel like the word "Join" shouldn't be capitalized. But that could just be me...
This sentence doesn't read too well. Maybe ditch one 'will'?
And now to show off a little bit!
No typos, just pure awesomeness!