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Personal Projects / Re: Dragon Quest I - IV: Delocalized
« on: July 01, 2020, 03:43:55 pm »
That explains it...I did it on a patched rom...I suck at computers and learned patching recently. XD Sorry about that. :-[

Thanx for the reply. I guess I'll see about the puff puff. :P

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Personal Projects / Re: Dragon Quest I - IV: Delocalized
« on: July 01, 2020, 07:30:06 am »
Hello. I love this patch. I just noticed a few errors in the script and wanted to point them out. I looked in the topic and didn't find them, so sorry if these are redundant. All of these are from the latest version on the site.

1: There's a merchant in Ladatorm, and his dialogue was okay before I applied the newest patch. Now it says 'Rumor has it, entire townshave bbeen destroyed by the monsters.' I'm not good at grammar, but I think I'd remove that comma too.

2: A red soldier in Rimuldar: 'Ismonstera sword in the land that can pierce the Dragon King's body?' Should this be 'Is there a sword' instead?

3: When you use the stairs command with no stairs: 'here are no stairs here..'

Those were the obvious ones. A couple more that just seemed slightly awkward to me...

1: Girl in Rimuldar: 'Chun is already late meeting me.' I have no idea how else to phrase it, but it seems a little weird. Maybe it's just me.

2: Soldier in Ladatorm: 'If you want to take a break, visit the king and record in the Adventure Log.' IMO this would be more natural if he said 'record your journey' or something. It's obvious what he means by context/experience though.

Please keep up the good work.

Edit is the puff puff girl in Rimuldar incomplete? She doesn't give me a choice, just asks the question. I was looking forward to it. XD

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