Thanks for the feedback sics. Bare with me, as I will be on and off checking the dialog (and in random orders).
If you want to see the dialogue in action, this video shows it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fJ0ZmOTPNQkI can reference the time stamps if necessary.
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For the Tutorial, I agree with the changes. Max1321 sort of removed stuff in the translation. Like the first part just talked about moving the beans, nothing about them appearing/reaching their destination.
The alt for part 5 (1:38) would be more misleading. The English text to be fair doesn't explain it well, but the game is over if you place a bean at a certain spot (later versions of Puyo have a X to indicate this). The alt is suggesting the beans can't go above the margin, when in fact, they can on 5 of the columns.
It's best to stick with "if you exceed the space". The demonstration just help in showing this know, so it makes more sense in context.
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So Davy Sprocket's first line: "A squirt like you has been reuniting too many beans."
So squirt is basically an insult, although a very tame and uncommon one. It's used as an insult when talking to a puny or insignificant person. I'm sure Team Rocket from Pokémon used it when talking about Ash (but I can't find any proof), and I found this, which I presume is text from Adventures of Billy and Mandy:
https://hg1.funnyjunk.com/pictures/How+to+insult_ceda65_5185285.pngSo we need to use a insult that is still family friendly. The fun part is picking a word that is suitable for all Spanish countries. Like "Pendejo" in Spain means "Coward" or "Wimp", while is slang in South America for "Pubic hair".
- Apparently calling someone a burro (donkey) is a popular and tame insult.
- Sics mentioned "renacuajo" (tadpole). Similiar to donkey.
- We could use "insignificante" (insignificant) which sticks to the correct meaning of squirt.
- "mequetrefe" would be a safe option. Used when calling someone an idiot.
- I can't find much information on "SOQUETE", although I suspect this is more used in Mexico
- "tonto" is used when saying someone isn't very smart.
Looking at the dialog, Spike also uses squirt. Although he is being more abrupt about it. So him saying "Vamos burro" would fit the character well.
For Davy, he is more calm about it, so tonto is a more friendly way of saying fool. "Un tonto como tú ha estado reuniendo demasiados Beans."
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Grounder's dialog is a bit of a pain to translate. The joke with the second line is SAM can be an abbreviation of "Surface to Air Missile", and an actually given name (short for Samuel). In Spanish, they are called Misil superficie-aire, which would be short for MAS. As sics has stated, MAS/MÁS in Spanish means MORE/PLUS.
As sics / Jate have mentioned, we could keep the joke by changing the type of weapon to Misil Aire-Tierra (air-to-ground missile)
https://sites.google.com/site/misiles04/tipos-de-misilesThis means Grounder's alt name can be MAT (short for Matthew/Mathew).
Now his third line I'm not even sure what they were going for. So he says "and I'm gonna have you for
launch." My understanding is this is play on the word "lunch", so he's saying I'm going to have you for lunch", but he is saying "launch" instead since he was talking about missiles that can be launched. Ha ha?

I would suggest changing it to make a joke about the missiles are targeting the player. So something like: y mis misiles están blanco en ti.
I'm sure blanco is used when talking about a target. Someone can correct me on that?
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For Humpty's second line, I think it's just best to remove the pun. Unless we can find a play on a word that uses huevo.
I just remembered there is an Inspector Gadget (2015) episode where Talon makes a lot of egg jokes. Netflix won't let me access the Spanish dub, but I can access the French. They basically keep the same idea using of using egg-, like so: Egg-cellent > soyons œuf-fensif (let's be offensive)
Curious what the Spanish dub does.
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