Here is a side by side comparison 1st quest ending of the FDS version and the NES version and the one I translated.

As stated earlier in this thread there is no extra space in this rom, therefore I had to make due with what I had to work with, is it great NO, but I don't think its all that bad either!
(notice how Link and Zelda disappear in the FDS version after they hold up the two pieces of triforce)
2ND quest ending, the only thing added was (END OF "ZELDA 1") and I changed the letter Y because it looked funny

If you can improve it please feel free to do so!!!!!!!!!!