Regarding the Subtitle. It has been removed. I ultimately decided to remove it, and the illusory frame it creates because I feel that the assymetry created by the unbalanced title draws attention to the trio below and makes the Mana Tree seem bigger and more fantastic.
I did however add the "Square ©1993" to the unopened black title screen at the beginning of the crawl. The beginning of the intro/title screen looked very oblong with the title all the way at the top, the credits in the middle, and nothing at the bottom. It needed something at the bottom to frame the credits. Despite it being legalese, I kept the "©" symbol. It's inclusion balanced the text better horizontally and just looked better.
Note: The title screen image on the download link is currently incorrect. There is no subtitle.
-Major Overhaul to the entire system message system.
-Changed "Tangled" status to "Slowed"
-Changed "Frostied" status to "Frozen"
-Changed "Ballooned" status to "Stunned"
-Changed "Shrunk" status to "Miniaturized"
-Changed "Engulf" status to "Burning"
-Minor adjustments to weapon and spell descriptions.
-Removed subtitle from title screen.
-Changed "Hit %" to "Accuracy %"
-Changed "Tinkly Barrier" to "Twinkly Barrier"
-Changed "Lycanslayer" to "Beastslayer"
-Changed "Silver Chain" to "Silver Whip"
-Changed "Chain Flail" to "Morningstar Whip"
-Changed "Chain Hammer" to "Hammer Whip"
-Changed "Diamond Chain" to "Diamond Whip"
-Changed "Gigas Chain" to "Gigas Whip"
-Changed "Blue Sorbet" to "Blue Bavarois"
-Changed Turtle Guard to Tortoise Guard
-Changed "Gas Cloud" to "Bluster Gas"
-Changed "Shadow x1" to "Shadow Boy"
-Changed "Shadow x2" to "Shadow Girl"
-Changed "Shadow x3" to "Shadow Sprite"
-Changed "Jabberwocky" to "Jabberwock"
-Changed "Frost Gigas" to "Frost Giant"
-Changed "Fire Gigas" to "Fire Giant"
-Changed "Thunder Gigas" to "Thunder Giant"
-Changed "Frost Gigas" to "Frost Giant"
-Changed "Sleep Flower" to "Sleep"
-Changed "The ultimate chain." to "The ultimate whip."
-Corrected typo "The village is a shambles!"
-Corrected typo "regain it's power"
-Corrected typo "and invitation"
-Changed "Water Palace" to "Water Shrine" at Gaia's Navel Cannon Man.
-Fixed Pamaela's Grandfather's dialogue bug.
-Changed Burst's icon from red to green to match it's graphics.
-Continued to resist the urge to change "Flail of Hope" to "Vampire Killer".
Some of the Status effect changes aren't actually new to this version went unmentioned. Secret of Mana has a number of inconsistently named status affects such as sleep and unconscious or slow and tangled. Weapons and spell descriptions may refer to tangled as slowed (or weight in japanese, thus leaden glare) or sleep as unconscious. All of these identical status have been merged and renamed. "Pygmized" has been renamed "Miniaturized" because "pygmy" is an offensive term.
A few enemies got renamed as well. Since clouds are all made of gases, "Gas Cloud" is redundant, so I updated it to the remake's "Bluster Gas". The Shadow x1, x2, and x3 distinctions have always felt odd and a little 4th wall breaking to me so they were renamed Shadow Boy, Girl, and Sprite respectively. "Jabberwocky" became "Jabberwock" because the creature in Lewis Carol's Jabberwocky is called the Jabberwock. The gigas bosses were rechristened as giants. Gigas is kind of a generic Japanese term for giant. In Greek Mythology Gigas is one of the Gigantes (Giants). To me, these creatures look more Norse than Greek, so I localized the name. Before people start complaining, just be glad I didn't change them to Jotunn.
A few weapons got an overhaul as well, I've talked about this before so I won't go deep into detail. All of the whips, are actually whips now. Before people complain please understand that I realize that the Hammer and Morningstar Whips are preposterous but it's still less preposterous than calling a whip a flail, morningstar, or combat chain (chain whip). The "Were-buster" got renamed from "Lycanslayer" to "Beastslayer". Lycan specifically refers to wolves and since the "Were" in this context refers animals, this localization made sense.