acediez and Metalwario64,
I'm sorry if my words hurt both your feeling.
I just want to inform that it's not working as I thought it should be.
Anyway,
Dialogue playing with X part2:
I tested it in between RC6 to RC8 so some should have been fixed.
Also, it's only base on what I think so as usual it's just a reminder.
You still have to decide it yourself in the end.
[Stage selection]
1) After Isoc's speech.
(Checked. Should be ok.)
2) After beating Nightmare Zero.
Zero (pink):
3) Gate appeared.
Alia:
- Time to end this nightmare!
("nightmare" > "Nightmare"?)
[Intro stage]
X:
- I'll be fine, don't worry. Besides, I have the Falcon Armor and Zero's saber with me.
(> "Don't worry, I'll be fine.")
- That dream I had earlier... does it have anything to do with this?
(> "does" > "Does")
???:
- So this was Zero's doing... our suspicions were well founded after all.
("our" > "Our") Updated in RC8.
[Alia explaining souls for the first time]
- Unlike the other Parts, Limited Parts must be used at the Weapon Select screen.
(> "screen" to "Screen"?)
[Amazon Area]
Dr. Light:
- Forgive me... all I can do is give you this Armor.
("all" to "All")
Commander Yammark:
- Well, not this time! To hell with this Nightmare hogwash, I am NOT being killed again!
("hogwash," > "hogwash." and "being" > "getting")
X:
- Not until you tell me exactly what this Nightmare business is all about!
(> "Not until you tell me exactly what is this Nightmare business all about!")
[Inami Temple]
Dr. Light:
- X, step into this capsule and I'll grant you a program to modify your armor.
("armor" > "Armor"? Dr Light used the same starting dialogue as at Inami Temple/ Magma Area/ Recycle Lab?)
???:
- W-Where is Zero...? Where... Where is m-my Zero, my greatest creation?!
("Where... Where" or "Where... where" ?)
[Laser Institute]
X:
- Even so, these might end up being useful. I'll try using them, let's see what happens.
("them, let's" > "them. Let's")
- Yeah... but I really wish there was a faster way to get through here.
("Yeah... but" > "Yeah... But")
- Shield Sheldon? Oh no... don't tell me he's involved in this scheme too!
("don't or "Don't" ?)
- Shield Sheldon... it really is you.
("it" or "It" or "It's really you." ?)
- Yeah, let's. Starting with YOU, you fake!
(Can the sentence just end with "Yeah, let's" ?)
- High Max! You and Isoc won't proceed further with yout plans!
("yout" > "your")
[Northpole Area]
Dr. Light:
- X... let me give you yet another new power.
("let" > "Let". Also, do you think of revising the whole sentence?)
- This capsule contains the foot program of the Shadow Armor.
("foot program" > "foot parts". So far, all Shadow used parts while Blade used program.)
X:
- I'm getting strong readings ahead... must be an Investigator!
("must" > "Must")
Blizzard Wolfang:
- That's correct. You see, because of my ineptitude, not only have my men perished, I also brought shame to my master, Gate.
(> "You see, because of my ineptitude, I caused my men perished and brought shame to my master, Gate.")
or you prefer it longer
(> "You see, because of my ineptitude, not only have I caused my men perished, but I also brought shame to my master, Gate.")
Alia's Mission Report on weapon:
- Shoots blocks of ice that you can stand on.
(Not sure with the grammar usage for "Shoots blocks".)
[Magma Area]
Alia:
- I can't say for sure because of the interference, but it just has to be - I've never seen anything like it!
("be - I've" Is that the right way to use Hyphens, En Dashes, and Em Dashes?)
Dr. Light:
- X, step into this capsule and I'll grant you a program to modify your armor.
("armor" > "Armor"? Dr Light used the same starting dialogue as at Inami Temple/ Magma Area/ Recycle Lab?)
X:
- Looks like I'm in quite the situation here... Is this also the Nightmare?
("quite the situation" or "quite a situation"?)
[Weapon Center]
(Checked. should be alright.)
[Recycle Lab]
Dr. Light:
- X, step into this capsule and I'll grant you a program to modify your armor.
("armor" > "Armor"? Dr Light used the same starting dialogue as at Inami Temple/ Magma Area/ Recycle Lab?)
Metal Shark Player:
- My name doesn't matter! You belong to me, now!
("me, now!" > "me now!")
???:
- Heh heh heh... the only one to die here... will be YOU!
("the" or "The" ?)
[Central Museum]
X:
- It's dead quite... what has the Nightmare done to this place?
("what" > "What")
Alia:
- A totem pole? But I can't see anything of the sort from here... which means it must be the work of the Nightmare! Be careful!
("the sort" > "that sort" and "which" > "Which" ?)
- The Investigator stationed at this area is Ground Scaravich.
("stationed at" > "stations in" ?)
Ground Scaravich:
- My, Oh my... if it isn't Officer X. How persistence of you to have bothered coming all this way.
("if" or "If" ?)
1a) Virtual area (Background Pyramid)
X: I'm out of range... what the hell is going on?
("what" > "What")
1b) Virtual area (Background Pyramid)
X: I can't reach her... where am I, anyway?
("where" > "Where")
2a) Virtual area (Background Aquarium. Going up)
(Checked. Should be alright.)
2b) Virtual area (Background Aquarium. Going down)
(Checked. Should be alright.)
3a) Virtual area (Background Dinasour skulls. Capsule located)
X: This area seems larger than the other one, but it's still swarming with Nightmare... they sure aren't making this easy.
("they" > "They")
3b) Virtual area (Background Dinasour skulls. To hidden area)
(Checked. Should be alright.)
4a) Virtual area (Background Earth and Galaxy. Hearttank located)
(Checked. Should be alright.)
4b) Virtual area (Background Earth and Galaxy.)
X: Another virtual area... why is the Nightmare changing up the museum like this, anyway?
("why" > "Why")
5) Hidden Area
???:
- X, don't tell me... You've gone Maverick, haven't you?
("You" or "you" ?)
[Secret Lab 1]
Alia:
- To think we'd find Gate's laboratory here, of all places... Proceed a little further ahead.
("here, of" > "here of")
X:
- ...Alia, can you hear me?
...the communication's off already. Well, nowhere to go but forward.
(> "...The") Updated in RC8.
[Secret Lab 2]
Gate:
- I've been waiting all my life for a chance like this, and I'm not going to let it pass me by, even if it costs me my life! Let's do this, X!
(> "I've been waiting all my life for a chance like this. I'm not going to let it pass me by even if it cost my life! Let's do this, X!")
[Final stage]
X:
- Good... he's not fully recovered yet!
("he's" or "He's" ?)
Sigma:
- Cough... X...? Y-you again... get lost!
(> "Get lost!")