I've been working on a partial retranslation for this game. The reason I started this project is because there are several lines in this game which are mistranslated. As a result, it's difficult for English speaking players to follow along with the story. I made a document in which I placed the Japanese script, the official English translation, and my own translation (whenever I thought it was neccessary) side by side. I'm basically done but I'm looking for someone (or multiple people) to do a translation check and help out with a couple of lines. Any help is appreciated, even if it's just a few lines you're sure about.