So far, I patched it into an unheadered FF2us 1.1 rom and it works fine and I started playing it and noticed a few mistakes. First is misspelled as "frst". Much like how "will" shouldn't be capitalized unless it's at the start of the sentence. My only advice is to fix typos and grammar mistakes when you write the story. Also, surrounded is misspelled as "surounded".
Overall, this hack is amazing IMO.