Now I need some help with translation:
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Your translations weren't too bad, but here are my suggestions:
D'Ouevre: Ooo hyoh hyoh! I, the mighty D'Ouevre, have helped myself to your restaurant! Buh-bye!
D'Ouevre: Congratulations on making it this far, you lucky cookie! But your luck ends here! Buh-bye!
D'Ouevre: Hyah hoh! You won't be able to keep up with magnificent me! Au revoir, sucker!
NOTES: (1) The phrases バイビー and ハイチャラバーイ are apparently catch phrases from old TV shows, and they're both "funny" ways of saying goodbye. You can use whatever you want for these. (2) D'Ouevre sticks さま on the end of his own name, attempting to give himself respect. Comic book and video game villians do this a lot.