Author Topic: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only] (Read 260379 times)

KingMike · « **Reply #40 on:** February 15, 2008, 12:50:43 pm »

Anybody want to try and design a title for Deep Dungeon III?
I've started working on this again. I think I have the bulk of the hacking work done, just need to make necessary changes to odino's translations as I test play.
I think the title is "The Journey to Become a Hero", but that's rather generic-sounding

, so I think I'd be better to make "Deep Dungeon III" the main title and turn the rest into a subtitle.
(and keeps consistancy, as Deep Dungeon IV kept the DD title, as did the MSX version of DD2 (though the FDS original didn't).

Thanks to anyone.

FlashPV · « **Reply #41 on:** February 18, 2008, 10:08:53 am »

Another one for me!

DarknessSavior · « **Reply #42 on:** February 18, 2008, 12:12:22 pm »

Looks nice. But you forgot a grammatical rule (I don't know the technical terms involved, but the general idea is there): anything that isn't a small word like "to" or "a" should be capitalized (like "Become").

~DS

Pennywise · « **Reply #43 on:** February 18, 2008, 01:55:30 pm »

That's pretty sweet looking. I say it's fine as is. It doesn't really bother me when certain grammar rules aren't being folllowed.

KingMike · « **Reply #44 on:** February 18, 2008, 02:16:56 pm »

That looks great.
(I hate to ask, but could you do a Roman numeral III? I only ask because other titles in the series used Roman numerals.)

Thanks again.

FlashPV · « **Reply #45 on:** February 19, 2008, 04:27:51 am »

Quote from: DarknessSavior on February 18, 2008, 12:12:22 pm

anything that isn't a small word like "to" or "a" should be capitalized.

Quote from: KingMike on February 18, 2008, 02:16:56 pm

I hate to ask, but could you do a Roman numeral III?

This one should do the trick.

Garoth Moulinoski · « **Reply #46 on:** February 19, 2008, 07:26:22 am »

That looks good!

(well, except the bricks in the back, but that has nothing to do with FlashPV)

DarknessSavior · « **Reply #47 on:** February 20, 2008, 08:07:34 am »

That it does. ^_^

~DS

Silas · « **Reply #48 on:** March 02, 2008, 09:07:34 am »

Updated, a little more polished.

Googie · « **Reply #49 on:** March 02, 2008, 08:00:22 pm »

Nice title screen Silas, I like it alot. Keep doing your thing...

Silas · « **Reply #50 on:** March 03, 2008, 11:12:08 am »

Quote from: Googie on March 02, 2008, 08:00:22 pm

Nice title screen Silas, I like it alot. Keep doing your thing...

, Thanks Googie! I really feel grateful, because you always had supported me, in absolutely everything.

Is there any work that you are doing right now which you may show to us?

Googie · « **Reply #51 on:** March 03, 2008, 08:09:16 pm »

I'll be having some pics up very soon, right now my main hacks my Adventure Island 3 hack, a Lode Runner hack and a MM1 hack that me & Dragonsbrethren are working on.

Silas · « **Reply #52 on:** March 04, 2008, 09:20:45 am »

Quote from: Googie on March 03, 2008, 08:09:16 pm

I'll be having some pics up very soon, right now my main hacks my Adventure Island 3 hack, a Lode Runner hack and a MM1 hack that me & Dragonsbrethren are working on.

These are good news! Do ghettoyouth and you are working on Mario's Destiny yet?

Googie · « **Reply #53 on:** March 04, 2008, 09:43:00 am »

Yeah we're still working on that hack, slow progress but we ain't letting that hack die.

Silas · « **Reply #54 on:** March 04, 2008, 08:25:44 pm »

Quote from: Googie on March 04, 2008, 09:43:00 am

Yeah we're still working on that hack, slow progress but we ain't letting that hack die.

When I saw Mario's Destiny gameplay video on youtube I thunk to stop my hack, really. But later I did think better. I must give my contribution to NES, MARIO, All NES fans,and all the great emulator's developers

(not only of NES.)

Maybe in the future I could add in my title screen, below the "New super Mario Bros. 3 hack", this phrase: "Because NES will never die."

Or someother better.

Googie · « **Reply #55 on:** March 05, 2008, 12:13:36 am »

If you can that'll be cool, here's a title screen I did...

I don't think it'll be used by Rockman, but I think it looks decent. ^^'

frantik · « **Reply #56 on:** March 05, 2008, 12:23:48 am »

for those who might have missed it.. the SMBSpecial title screen

KingMike · « **Reply #57 on:** March 05, 2008, 12:49:58 am »

This is what happens when I try to go it alone. (I actually used eight pixels less height than the original.)
I found another font that I thought would look good.
Then I realize it'd just be a ripoff of the Star Ocean logo, after which somebody would probably kill me if they ever recognized me.

frantik · « **Reply #58 on:** March 05, 2008, 01:56:08 am »

nice i like that

Reaper Man · « **Reply #59 on:** March 05, 2008, 02:20:48 am »

The stars are a bit too "cut off" from the background. It looks... cropped.

Perhaps if you made the stars taper off instead of just stopping abruptly at the image border, it'll help.