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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #40 on: February 15, 2008, 12:50:43 pm »
Anybody want to try and design a title for Deep Dungeon III?
I've started working on this again. I think I have the bulk of the hacking work done, just need to make necessary changes to odino's translations as I test play.
I think the title is "The Journey to Become a Hero", but that's rather generic-sounding :P, so I think I'd be better to make "Deep Dungeon III" the main title and turn the rest into a subtitle.
(and keeps consistancy, as Deep Dungeon IV kept the DD title, as did the MSX version of DD2 (though the FDS original didn't).

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #41 on: February 18, 2008, 10:08:53 am »
Another one for me!  :crazy:
« Last Edit: February 18, 2008, 10:26:02 am by FlashPV »

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #42 on: February 18, 2008, 12:12:22 pm »
Looks nice. But you forgot a grammatical rule (I don't know the technical terms involved, but the general idea is there): anything that isn't a small word like "to" or "a" should be capitalized (like "Become").

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #43 on: February 18, 2008, 01:55:30 pm »
That's pretty sweet looking. I say it's fine as is. It doesn't really bother me when certain grammar rules aren't being folllowed.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #44 on: February 18, 2008, 02:16:56 pm »
That looks great.
(I hate to ask, but could you do a Roman numeral III? I only ask because other titles in the series used Roman numerals.)

Thanks again.
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #45 on: February 19, 2008, 04:27:51 am »
anything that isn't a small word like "to" or "a" should be capitalized.
I hate to ask, but could you do a Roman numeral III?
This one should do the trick.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #46 on: February 19, 2008, 07:26:22 am »
That looks good! :D (well, except the bricks in the back, but that has nothing to do with FlashPV)
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #47 on: February 20, 2008, 08:07:34 am »
That it does. ^_^

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #48 on: March 02, 2008, 09:07:34 am »
Updated, a little more polished.



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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #49 on: March 02, 2008, 08:00:22 pm »
Nice title screen Silas, I like it alot. Keep doing your thing...  :thumbsup:
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #50 on: March 03, 2008, 11:12:08 am »
Nice title screen Silas, I like it alot. Keep doing your thing...  :thumbsup:
:), Thanks Googie! I really feel grateful, because you always had supported me, in absolutely everything.

Is there any work that you are doing right now which you may show to us?

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #51 on: March 03, 2008, 08:09:16 pm »
I'll be having some pics up very soon, right now my main hacks my Adventure Island 3 hack, a Lode Runner hack and a MM1 hack that me & Dragonsbrethren are working on.  :thumbsup:
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #52 on: March 04, 2008, 09:20:45 am »
I'll be having some pics up very soon, right now my main hacks my Adventure Island 3 hack, a Lode Runner hack and a MM1 hack that me & Dragonsbrethren are working on.  :thumbsup:

These are good news! Do ghettoyouth and you are working on Mario's Destiny yet?


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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #53 on: March 04, 2008, 09:43:00 am »
Yeah we're still working on that hack, slow progress but we ain't letting that hack die. ;)
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #54 on: March 04, 2008, 08:25:44 pm »
Yeah we're still working on that hack, slow progress but we ain't letting that hack die. ;)

When I saw Mario's Destiny gameplay video on youtube I thunk to stop my hack, really. But later I did think better. I must give my contribution to NES, MARIO, All NES fans,and all the great emulator's developers :thumbsup: (not only of NES.)

Maybe in the future I could add in my title screen, below the "New super Mario Bros. 3 hack", this phrase: "Because NES will never die." :laugh:
Or someother better.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #55 on: March 05, 2008, 12:13:36 am »
If you can that'll be cool, here's a title screen I did...



I don't think it'll be used by Rockman, but I think it looks decent. ^^'
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #56 on: March 05, 2008, 12:23:48 am »
for those who might have missed it.. the SMBSpecial title screen  :beer:


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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #57 on: March 05, 2008, 12:49:58 am »

This is what happens when I try to go it alone. (I actually used eight pixels less height than the original.)
I found another font that I thought would look good.
Then I realize it'd just be a ripoff of the Star Ocean logo, after which somebody would probably kill me if they ever recognized me. :P
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #58 on: March 05, 2008, 01:56:08 am »
nice i like that

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #59 on: March 05, 2008, 02:20:48 am »
The stars are a bit too "cut off" from the background. It looks... cropped.

Perhaps if you made the stars taper off instead of just stopping abruptly at the image border, it'll help.
« Last Edit: March 06, 2008, 06:38:45 pm by Reaper Man »