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Author Topic: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]  (Read 315972 times)

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #100 on: October 27, 2008, 06:50:24 pm »
This should be the final version.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #101 on: October 28, 2008, 11:42:45 pm »
Overall, the title screen looks great.  The smaller letters look kind of weird though, especially the 'R' and a little with the 'E.'  And the "or" between start and continue looks out of place.

That "OR" is Konami's doing, not mine. I'm not moving it.

As for the love soldier bit... I know they look weird. Maybe once I get the stuff reinserted and rearranged I'll tinker with it.
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #102 on: October 29, 2008, 09:47:00 am »
New title revision:

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #103 on: October 30, 2008, 04:23:42 am »
I've seen this on other boards too, but I have to say that it is down right beautiful. I will say the "Load Game" has me a little worried. If you plan on having a save feature, I suggest making two versions of the hack. One with and one without. Can't make a cart out of one with a save feature as easily...
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #104 on: October 30, 2008, 02:05:44 pm »
Hmmm... I hadn't thought of that. Sure I'll make 2 then. I'll leave the save feature for last then. thanks for bringing that up, dude! =)

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #105 on: November 07, 2008, 04:28:49 pm »
Hmm... the only one I can think of is the R in Soldier that might need twaking. The others are OK with me.  :thumbsup:

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #106 on: November 07, 2008, 06:09:07 pm »
Might also want to move the TM so it's not floating in the middle of nowhere.

(or remove it. But I can't remember if you or someone else advised against removing TM markings for fear of legal wraith.)
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #107 on: November 11, 2008, 08:57:20 am »

Trying to make something a little more streamlined than what I used to have...
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #108 on: November 11, 2008, 08:14:56 pm »
[img]http://d.imagehost.org/0501/logo.png[/img]
Trying to make something a little more streamlined than what I used to have...
Looks like a nice shape so far. I really liked the setup of your old logo, though. (Forgive my lack of knowledge of art-terms <_<) It would be great if you could have this logo, but with a similar presentation to the first one. Do you still have the white color available?
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #109 on: November 13, 2008, 07:32:48 am »
Might I suggest trimming the ō macron a bit? Other than that it looks pretty nice if you're working in confined space :D

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #110 on: December 15, 2008, 10:40:14 pm »

Just a little something from my total conversion hack of FFVI.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #111 on: December 28, 2008, 01:26:30 pm »
O_O...That's sexy
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #112 on: January 25, 2009, 10:18:34 pm »


It took me almost all saturday, but now it's done.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #113 on: January 26, 2009, 05:25:00 am »
God, that is hard to read. Good work nonetheless, though.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #114 on: February 06, 2009, 11:52:48 pm »

Any designers want to try this one, The Milky Way Trio?
There's a star that flashes out of the middle of "ga" (the square shape near the left middle).
Otherwise, I think I've the hacking work on all parts of the game accessible within a few minutes.
Leaving actually playing this and formatting the script and such.
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #115 on: February 09, 2009, 09:02:23 am »
What's the japanese title of this game? Maybe I'll give it a try.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #116 on: February 09, 2009, 09:10:50 am »
Ginga no Sannin.
NES port by Nintendo of an obscure Enix space RPG "Earth Fighter Rayizer" (or maybe Raizer).
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #117 on: February 12, 2009, 09:29:04 am »
First draw.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #118 on: February 12, 2009, 09:43:16 am »
It's really hard to read IMO. You should maybe make it less italic. Like, maybe add 1/3 of "straightness" to each vertically straight edge or something... Also, wouldn't it would probably look better if the letters were larger and the the maybe inset in the m's legs or something..

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #119 on: February 28, 2009, 08:41:08 am »
Ok it's no longer italic and it's more readable this way. What do you think?