As previously stated the song "Plot" was a throwaway song (made in an hour actually) and is just a filler for the video; basically you don't need to tell me it's crap, I already know
. In hindsight, using bloody tears for the video is a better option. I'll consider making a better song when I have enough free time so I can study the style of Konami, specifically the styles of Satoe Terashima and Kenichi Matsubara who composed for the game. The are quite great at making catchy music with great music theory and in my opinion; much work will have to be put in to match their style.
Also feel free to modify the problems you have with the first song; however, those "dischords" are not by accident but on purpose; they are there to create a sense of unease which can be used for sad songs, but feel free to change it.
Again I appreciate the feedback. The main reason I contribute to projects is to improve on my music skills. I actually excel as slow paced songs as opposed to fast paced songs. So your feedback does help!