« on: January 04, 2020, 01:43:55 pm »
Good work! Perhaps we should go with Scrap Shot, as you said, DarkSamus. I can take a look at the text & offer some corrections later. Would be a good idea to get those out of the way.
January 05, 2020, 01:16:58 am - (Auto Merged - Double Posts are not allowed before 7 days.)
- Line 72: Replace "cks" with "X".
- Line 85: capitalize "perhaps". Might want to capitalize any word that comes after ellipses on a different line.
- Line 91: Replace "Ghaha" with "Gahaha".
- Lines 87, 95, & 103: Can you add an exclamation mark to the end of these sentences? Or a period? And if possible, could you have them on one line? It looks a bit off.
- Misc. Text Line 21: Would it be possible to put a space between "C.Hunter"? Or if you can spell out the whole name, that'd be cool too.