- Can any parts be simplified or made to be more clear?
- Does it flow well?
- Are the images too big?
- Should I change the "Step 1", "Step 2" etc. titles?
- Is the document in the proper tense? Step 3: "We found a result..." Step 4: "After a few more searches we find a result..."
- Add shortcuts at the beginning to each step.
- I might break Step 15 into separate steps with a few more images.
Thanks for taking a look, you can download it here.