That's why I changed it to His Excellency---to avoid any confusion.
Ahh, I see. I misread that. Thank you.
Some more:
1) During the final scene of the Mana Holy Land, the conversation was suppose to last to the exact moment of the music's end (before Thanatos blows up the tree), but it ends before the music is completed -- that really decreases the epicness of the scene. Perhaps you can add an additional text box or something to extend the conversation, so that the music actually finishes?
2) During the Mana Tree conversation, the tree says, "In a moment, godbeasts from throughout the world will gather...". Don't you mean, "In a moment, godbeasts throughout the world will gather..."? (delete "from")
3) During the Mana Tree conversation, the tree says, "Among living things, it's unique in that way." Perhaps, "Among all living things,"?
4) Same conversation... "But when so much Mana is lost, so fast, the Mana Beast..." -- I don't think there's supposed to be a comma between "lost" and "so".
@QueueIt seems that it's not just Great Viper, but also Dragon Worm that is missing the "explosion, victory pose, music, etc" at the end. That may need fixing.
Also, the same for Dark Lich.