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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #160 on: November 21, 2009, 04:35:44 am »
東映動画 (とうえいどうが) -- Tōei Animations (as in animated film material, not Anime)

@OP: If you want to be totally correct (and possibly politically, too), you should add a Macron for Shūeisha (集英社) above the u as just shown.
Also, the studios -- for whatever reason -- usually go all caps when written in roman. Toriyama Akia's 「BIRD STUDIO」 is mentioned on his Wikipedia page.

Maybe that's a good option here since you use small capitals anyway? Also, is the problem the width of all these things, or what exactly? "Bird Studio/ Shueisha" does look like it would fit, so maybe just make the others the same height and center them and call it good?

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #161 on: November 22, 2009, 08:15:22 pm »




Bumpidee-bump!  I'm just wondering if anyone has been able to tackle this monster...?

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #162 on: November 22, 2009, 10:38:15 pm »
RC, here's the Sunday update I promised. Sorry it was so late; I had programming homework and other stuff totally unrelated to WoW. I swear. On something totally unimportant.

Jokes aside, here:









Note that the Shueisha one is the same as before because the rest of the logos were changed (read: remade) to match the style of the Shueisha one.

I hope this is good enough...

(If they look fuzzy, right click view to see the sharper image)
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #163 on: November 23, 2009, 12:39:19 am »
Love 'em. I'll try to get them in the game tomorrow and post up a screenshot. Thanks Garoth. You're awesome.  :beer:
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #164 on: November 26, 2009, 02:23:25 am »
As promised:



I really like it. Nice work! :)
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #165 on: November 26, 2009, 04:53:25 am »
As promised:



I really like it. Nice work! :)

Yeah, pretty nice! They didn't quite look right on the black background, but in the game they really blend in perfectly.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #166 on: November 26, 2009, 09:55:05 am »
Damn, that is nice looking.
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #167 on: December 03, 2009, 03:39:47 pm »


At this point my translation is pretty much finished. I went ahead and hacked in the english title screen, but one thing remains. I've set it up so that the flame effect can work and now I'm just waiting for the flames. It's be awesome if someon wanted to give it a shot. The "ONTRA" are four tiles high and there was only enough CHR for the top 3 tiles.

Oh, while I'm at it, The Circle of Heaven and Hell anyone?

« Last Edit: December 03, 2009, 03:45:01 pm by Pennywise »

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #168 on: December 03, 2009, 04:26:34 pm »
Maybe you should try with theses colors.

Send me the patch for your title screen and I'll take care of the flame effect.
I'll try to do the other title screen too.
Edit: It's done:
« Last Edit: December 04, 2009, 01:47:54 am by FlashPV »

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #169 on: December 04, 2009, 05:22:14 am »
Hi,

This is the screentitle french hack for Samuri Pizza Cats (Cat Ninden Teyandee) [NES].  What do you think about the chosen colors?

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #170 on: December 04, 2009, 05:24:08 am »
Took me much more work than I expected (the full story's in the retranslation thread), but I changed the subtitle in the logo to English. :3

Chiriyuku polaroid, atsumete paranoia...tsugi wa dare no ban da oshiete hoshii...

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #171 on: December 05, 2009, 01:08:29 am »
That is BEAUTIFUL!
'We have to find some way to incorporate the general civilians in the plot'

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #172 on: December 05, 2009, 01:23:51 am »
Hi,

This is the screentitle french hack for Samuri Pizza Cats (Cat Ninden Teyandee) [NES].  What do you think about the chosen colors?

You already know what I think of this. ;)
« Last Edit: December 05, 2009, 01:36:12 am by Kitsune Sniper »
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #173 on: December 05, 2009, 01:27:47 am »
Is it supposed to be spelled SAMOURAI?
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #174 on: December 05, 2009, 01:36:54 am »
*Ahem* He said it's from a "French" hack.

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #175 on: December 05, 2009, 03:28:49 am »
Yes, in french the title is "Les samurai pizza cats"  :D

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #176 on: December 06, 2009, 02:00:21 pm »
I've finally changer my screentitle, as it was too big to fit into the ROM without expanding it (which is possible, but leads to the expansion of both PRG (128kB) and CHR number of banks).

Moreover, I find it better than the old one :
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #177 on: December 06, 2009, 04:08:19 pm »
And since he was kind enough to let me swipe the title screen, I'll be handing him a copy of the original English script so he can translate that to French.

We need more international collaborations, people. ;P
« Last Edit: December 06, 2009, 06:11:59 pm by Kitsune Sniper »
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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #178 on: December 30, 2009, 06:33:48 am »
WIP

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Re: Titlescreens: Screenshots & Edits [Constructive Criticism Only]
« Reply #179 on: December 30, 2009, 09:42:57 am »
A couple that still have awhile to go before completion, but I thought I'd request them.


The Legend of Peach Boy


Nadia - The Secret of Blue Water
(sorry if the image is kind of crappy. I believe the game uses the 256 pixel wide mode, but Kega Fusion stretches it to 320x240, and stored the screenshot at double size. So, I tried to reverse it.)
(somebody able to do better at converting the official logo?)
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